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Twyla In Wonderland


Love's always in season and love is love. The world is changing and everyone has a view.

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This is set in an universe were the Mane 5 (Twilight is not here) meet all again for the first time when assigned a project for Media. Then something supernatural started to happen to one of them.

(To be edited soon)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 4 )

I like it. A bit rushed, and a lot of swears, but other wise it was good! I bet that is how Sunset was before Equestria Girls.

Everybody do the flop!

6223271 WHY...is it that no matter what......I'M ALWAYS ABLE TO FIND YOU AND PINKIELUNASHY?!?!?

I just want to point out that this story needs proofreading. There are jumps between past and present tense, run on sentances, and framents in each chapter.

The errors make what could be an interesting story into a very difficult to read one. :twilightblush:

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