• Member Since 10th May, 2015
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Twyla In Wonderland


Love's always in season and love is love. The world is changing and everyone has a view.

Comments ( 7 )

Hmm. Grammar is a bit out of whack, a pre-reader would do wonders for you. It's also pretty fast paced, though I think if you fluffed up a few bits that would solved a lot of it. And some of the wording is awkward, could be phrased better. However it's really cute! Very nice.

Sorry, I'm late to this one. I was in las vegas for a while and I was unable to log on. So, nice story.
Since then I've been able to restart on another draft to another themed drawing for you film.

Soo much fluff! I'm squealing so much my neighbors are telling me to quiet down! :heart:
:pinkiehappy:
:yay:
:raritywink:
:twilightsmile:

6576209 Thanks for that comment that made me smile

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