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Twyla In Wonderland


Love's always in season and love is love. The world is changing and everyone has a view.

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Fluttershy is going to pop the question to Twilight, and is worried if their relationship is ready for a big step.

Is she going to say yes.

(Rated T for bad language) It's not really a squeal, but Fluttershy's attitude comes from here when I finish it.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 22 )

Avalanche i like it and can you make one more chapter where Fluttershy and Twilight Sparkle get married

The in-depthness of this fic is simply breathtaking. FIVE STARS!!

5996751 you see. It might take me a while because I'm not good at writing weddings, but I'll try. :ajsmug:

Comment posted by dream1990 deleted May 20th, 2015

i like it and can you make sequel for this story where the married couple in this story where their adopt a child plus rise it together as a family while in a house together with doing family stuff together or add that to this story

5999298 I'm working on one actually, but it's a little different then the normal romance cute fic. Is that okay

5999309 that ok and when will it be out? also i sent you a message

5999313 I don't know yet? Hopefully at the end of the month.

Fluttershy's feel out of character.

6002350 could u explain what u mean so i can sort it out. :pinkiehappy:

6003192 Probably this comment should go more into the first chapter.
The way you describe Fluttershy in this story is quite extroverted, and violent. You may tell me she is excited because what is going to happen. But I can hardly recognize the character with that attitude. Fluttershy without at least a bit of anxiety is unnatural.

This is the first story I read from you. I don't know if this is how you usually portrait Fluttershy in your other stories or if this behavior is the result of a change in her character through your stories. If it is the latter I would suggest a link to at least one of the prequels where she changes.

6003701 Well I haven't finished it, but here is were Fluttershy fully changes into a more confident, and violent person.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/264782/dont-leave-the-past-behind

5997937 How does one link to a story that doesn't exist.

6033772 The story was a fail sorry about that. I deleted it, and forgot to edit this. I will sort it out.

personally, i didn't like it. there was no build-up at all. it was litterally lik "im gonna pop the question, oh hey, everypony'd here, will you marry me? the end"

build it up. thats all i have to say

6125057 it's just a one off story so there will be many mistakes, but thanks for the feed back

6125896 hi backstory nice to meet you again!

... whats that we have never met before

well still

I am not a shipper but nawwwwwwww

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