A mob pony from Manehatten who comes to ponyville looking to start fresh. Silvermane is his name and crime is his game, and he's a pro at this game.
Soon enough, however, he comes to love something or should I say somepony more then crime. Does Rarity have what it takes to be a mob girlfriend?
Your story title needs to be capitalized, along with the chapter titles and the proper nouns "Manehattan" and "Ponyville". You also spelled Manehattan wrong.
This needs punctuation. Also, I suggest you learn the difference between "then" and "than".
Nice:)
6229000 Thanks for pointing that out; sometimes I absentmindedly over look details.