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lord starbreaker


Humanity: you're a nihilist. Me: I don't care

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A mob pony from Manehatten who comes to ponyville looking to start fresh. Silvermane is his name and crime is his game, and he's a pro at this game.
Soon enough, however, he comes to love something or should I say somepony more then crime. Does Rarity have what it takes to be a mob girlfriend?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 3 )

Your story title needs to be capitalized, along with the chapter titles and the proper nouns "Manehattan" and "Ponyville". You also spelled Manehattan wrong.

Soon enough however he comes to love something or should I say somepony more then crime.

This needs punctuation. Also, I suggest you learn the difference between "then" and "than".

6229000 Thanks for pointing that out; sometimes I absentmindedly over look details.

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