The Autobots are working with a space bridge when a malfunction occurs, which leads them to a strange new dimension. A dimension filled with rainbow coloured, magical, talking ponies! As the Autobots adjust to the strange world of My Little Pony, they discover the malfunction was not accident, and that the ponies are in desperate need of their help.
There is a small hiatus right now, not because we aren't interested in the story, but because I, as in the main writer of the story, am writing a couple of other stories that really have my attention right now. I still love this story, and can't wait to finish it and get to the plot twist, if you can call that a spoiler, I just am busy with other things. We definitely will finish writing it, just not now. We hope you understand.
Sorry I'm not trying to be mean, but you need to think this through a little harder and put more effort into it. The writing seems sloppy, and there's already some plot holes, the biggest one I can think o right now being that Twilight said she recognized the vehicles the transformers turned into because she was in the Canterlot High world which is inhabited by humans, however when Ratchet mentions the human species she says she's never heard of or seen them. I'm pretty sure she would have learned what humans were during her time there, I know you had her and Ratchet talk and maybe she figured out while they were talking that humans are very similar to the inhabitants of Canterlot High. But if that's what you were going for you should have explained that, (and not with Pinkie Pie she didn't do a good enough job) in short you needed to explain and detail things a little better. Finally my only other significant problem is the personalities (at least of the transformers) are mostly bland, try to capture the characters personalities a little better, I know that's hard to do believe me. I'm not trying to hate I'm trying to give constructive criticism. I'm sorry if I offended you.
6180622 Thanks for giving me feedback! It means a lot to me.
6180667 Glad to hear it. :)
When will the Power Ponies show up? I see the tag but they're not in the story yet.
6200994 I can't give to many spoilers, let's just say that something bad happens... you won't have to wait to much longer.
6205620 ok...
Nice.
6289665 You'll learn soon enough. All I can say for now is something happened when Megatron came.
Finally! I've been waiting to see the Power Ponies tage be made use of.
Kinda short but I liked it
6596276 Thanks! I really like this one too, even though it is the shortest so far.
hahaha butt tattoo genius
finally! now they're getting somewhere
True about the premier. also when are we getting the Power Ponies?
7070613 They should come up in the chapter after the next, but the next few might be finished earlier than the previous ones. It's spring break and we have a road trip ahead of us, so we have lots of time to work on the story.
Yeah, I know I'm late to this, but Arcee, in this continuity, isn't pink. She's blue and black.
7104815 Thanks for checking out our story!
Yeah, you're right. We forgot that. I'll fix that. She has some pink, but she has more black than pink.
Thank you for helping us improve our story!
interesting chapter, and I was just about to ask about the Power Ponies until you clarified