• Member Since 12th Mar, 2015
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CatStar The Fourth


Bikes are look like horses, except less inspiring. Sunglasses are awesome, even at night. Also caps lock is anger for lazy people. Don't worry, I could go on and on and on and on and on and on and...

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Luna goes in the Golden Medallion to get a ceremonial crown for Twilight´s upcoming celebration. It´s a bit harder than she originally thought.

The cover art is from the first Equestria Girls and I don´t own it.
Thanks to Gadgetphile for helping me grammar the thing.
This is my first published fanfic so I decided to make it a oneshot. Constructive criticism encouraged, especially regarding grammar.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

I don't know what to say, except for the obvious fact that you'll need an editor. May I?

Typos in the description don't sell your story.

Comment posted by CatStar The Fourth deleted Jul 27th, 2015

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Im new to writing for FimFiction anyway, so go ahead. I definatly need one, since my grammer is pure Pickle-Silly.

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Thanks for the heads up, I´m working on them now.
(If I can find them..)

i did a dramatic read of your fan fic

I loved this, it had a nice ballance of humor to detail and story telling was great! Not to mention the great vocabulary!

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