"I found the first chapter entertaining, but this one...
it felt like you were copying the first chapter and cupcakes, instead of doing anything new.
although, i did burst into laughter from this mental image:
Using the scalpel, she cut the top of the small intestine; then she placed the top of the intestine into a hand-held egg beater. “Well,” she giggled “let’s wrap this up now” She began spinning the egg-beater, which started pulling and unraveling Rarity’s intestines out like spaghetti, which wrapped around the egg beater until there was too much for the egg beater to spin anymore."

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Aw man, I did my best to use only new torture techniques. Let's look at the differences:
Fluttershy: wings removed with hedge clippers; eyelids cut off; cutie marks cut off with cookie cutters; tail ripped off; watched Angel get eaten; generic ending (not easy to be creative when you get to that part; the creativity is pretty limited to what happens on the outside)
Rarity: Mouth sewn shut; cutie marks cut off with scissors, watched Sweetie get stabbed and squished like a grape; horn removed by power drill; gets scalped; once again, generic cut open scene.

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Ooooh, tesla coil! gimme gimme!

also, it's not the torture, its more the formatting and dialouge.
oh, and the napkin thing.

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Two years ago my brother, the family physicist, got a Tesla coil for Christmas
I know the napkin thing was overdone, but it was so easy.

Gosh darn it that Tom!

Really got me frightened and sad

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It was either that or have her push a shelf over on top of Sweetie Belle. Say, what do you think of the way I had Sweetie's horn land right at Rarity's hooves when she dies? I think it adds a nice tragic yet poetic touch.

755046 DUN DUN DUUUUUUNNN
(yes, it does)

this pleases me nice work i thought it was nice with Tom in it, never thought id see tom in a Grimdark

WTF did I just read.......

I feel so sick i was drinking fruit punch and its red

I like this. I like almost anything Cupcakes, and I don't even know why. I feel like a horrible person...
Sweetie Belle's death affected me more than any other part of the story. I am firmly of the opinion that is best pony, and I just hate it when she dies. If I ever get my hands on Tom, I'm going to... um, brutally carve him into a statue of Sweetie Belle, in memory of her. Or something weird like that.

I want more cupcakes....

maybe...just a little...bite (bite)

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Whats a Tesla coil?

2710293 Beyond the trees and beyond the forest, past the groves and swamps and mountains, there lies a magical hut in the land of Hogo. He will lead you toward the right direction.. the direction called Google.

2711721Okay....

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So yeah.

Google it.

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Its electric.

753888 Wait a minute, when did AJ's corpse get on the wall?