• Member Since 6th Apr, 2012
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Jay911


Firefighter, 911 operator/dispatcher, racing & anime fan, onetime prolific fanfic writer (in his own mind)

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Bon Bon tries to figure out why Lyra still seems upset by her secret. Before she can straighten things out, her hoof is forced by circumstances beyond her control.

Short story created in response to the "Writer's Training Grounds" post on Equestria Daily for post-episode-100 story challenges.

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Comments ( 3 )

I like it! Short and sweet, but it felt genuine and interesting. :pinkiesmile:

Sweet!
Lyra and Bon Bon come to life in your short little narrative and transform that silly episode 100 gag into something worth exploring.
Well done. And whenever I see 'M' in the future I'll think 'C' instead.
Good thing with that Last Pony group... I'd never have found this little gem otherwise. :moustache:

Subterranian worms the size of houses? Did she use radio-controlled wagons and dynamite to eliminate the threat?

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