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I'm cosplayer, Brony, and more (* cough * Gamer * cough * cough *).
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i guess I'm the first to comment on this AMAZING story keep up the good work my good Sir/Madame.
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Thank you for your Kind words.
And i think Sir will do just right. But on secound thought i dont realy like Sir. Soooo.
Dusty or Dustwalker will do just Fine.
Do you get ego?
Also you see the VOT nanofrager
Do play defianc on PC or xbox?
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I play on the PC.
And she gets her EGO pretty soon.
And the Nanofragger is supposed to be visable
Ho I play on xbox what's your ego rating
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. I think I should play it again. Just to refresh my mind.
I don't know anymore lost track of it
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Ego: let's go earn some scrip
is there a BMG ?
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A what?
I would like to answer your question but i dont know what you are talking about.
I would like to give you some constructive criticism. While I have not yet read your story I can tell from the description of the story you need to get an editor and/or proofreader for you story. I understand that English isn't your primary language, but the bad spelling and Grammer is going to turn people away from your story (whether it is good or not). So I highly recommend you get an editor and/or proofreader.
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Thanks. Yes i know that i have to get an Editor but i can't seem to find one. But anyways Thanks for your kind words. I will try and find an editor as soon as i can
6300702 Editor group here is a group that you should look for editors in.
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Wow thanks a lot i will look imto this as soon as i have some time. But still thanks a lot this is going to help me.
This might be the most ironically named story on the site.
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I know.... But who cares
Right?
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Thank you for you words I will remember them the next time I am playing.
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Thank you again. It is always nice to hear when people tell me what they think.
Some just press thumbs up or thumbs down and that's it no words of advice... nothing. But you said you like the story and that is something i appreciate.
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OOOOh i know just what you are talking about.
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Something like that. But not so....... well around the lines of this.
Do you have an editor?
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No.
Still looking for one. I found this group called 'Looking for Editors'.
But I still didn't found one.
Why do you ask?
Looks strange but hey it's worth a shot
. Will read later
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Eh.... I have given up on this story a while ago, looking to make a rewrite
7451195 I finished reading it some time ago. While I see potential in this, there are quite a few grammar issues. Mainly from description and in the story. Not to say it's a bad story but there are problems. Overall, it is good but needs work. I hope to see more
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You know.... Stuff like you wrote just now, I kinda need that to improve myself.
As I told every reader in the story description and the author's note of the first chapter, THIS is my very first story and I need info and stuff like that. As you can see, most people just down vote this story without giving me any criticism. And that kinda sucked.
But enough about my sorry self and Thank you for your time.
7452606 A) No problem. Happy to help. B) I got a dislike on my story but sadly, I don't know why hence, I can't fix it if I don't know the problem. C) We all need improvment at one point so don't beat yourself up over it.