First of all let me introduce myself. My name is or was John. Friends call my Ivan. I had a good live untill my 23. Birthday. We had the idea, to dress us like the Charakters from our Favorite Games?
I would like to give you some constructive criticism. While I have not yet read your story I can tell from the description of the story you need to get an editor and/or proofreader for you story. I understand that English isn't your primary language, but the bad spelling and Grammer is going to turn people away from your story (whether it is good or not). So I highly recommend you get an editor and/or proofreader.
6300679 Thanks. Yes i know that i have to get an Editor but i can't seem to find one. But anyways Thanks for your kind words. I will try and find an editor as soon as i can
I would like to give you some constructive criticism. While I have not yet read your story I can tell from the description of the story you need to get an editor and/or proofreader for you story. I understand that English isn't your primary language, but the bad spelling and Grammer is going to turn people away from your story (whether it is good or not). So I highly recommend you get an editor and/or proofreader.
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Thanks. Yes i know that i have to get an Editor but i can't seem to find one. But anyways Thanks for your kind words. I will try and find an editor as soon as i can
6300702 Editor group here is a group that you should look for editors in.
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Wow thanks a lot i will look imto this as soon as i have some time. But still thanks a lot this is going to help me.