I'm um, Fluttershy. Not doing okay but wanting to write, even if it's messy. Suffering from bad OCD. Trying to overcome it, lest my, um, writing deteriorate. I can do this~
Pseudo Song arrived in Ponyville a couple of months ago. Since then, everypony has really taken a shine to him.
Everypony thinks he is a funny, charming, sophisticated but troubled pony who isn't quite perfect. But he does his best! And he may be shy and nervous but he nearly always manages to come through no matter what. When he doesn't, it doesn't last long because he has his friends around him.
And to be honest?
That's all that matters in the end.
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Damn son, this is your first story? Congrats, this was really good!
At first, I thought that this might be another Mane 6 harem story, but it quickly turned into something much more, and something certainly much better!
Aside from a few grammatical and spelling errors (which don't hold back the story at all), what you've got here is something really good. I'm excited to see what you'll do in the future!
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Thank you so much, this means a lot!
I was planning to begin to write another story but kept putting it off. You've inspired me to keep going though
By the way, I really, really enjoyed The Itch, just thought I`d say!
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Awesome, I'm glad I could do that for you! Just keep doing what makes you happy!
I'm glad you enjoyed the Itch as well, I appreciate that.
Best of luck, and if you're ever looking for someone to preread your stuff, I make a pretty good grammar nazi
Having been pleasantly surprised by your other story (Filth) a while back, I was interested to read this one too. Its best point is undoubtedly the twist, which really works effectively, or at least it did for me. Unfortunately, the apparent desire to give everypony a scene means it drags a fair bit. With some tighter editing, this could have been really good; as it is, it's simply readable.