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One fateful day, the orange star appeared in the heavens, then exploded into a supernova, causing the planets of Disney and Equestria to merge as one. Legendary Sorcerer Yen Sid of Disney and Princess Celestia of Equestria will be watching over the balance of their new world as their students Mickey Mouse and Twilight Sparkle, along with their friends--old and new--to embark on a journey to travel all over their new home world to ensure every soul's safety.
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Nowadays, I associate Disney with Kingdom Hearts, but so far so good. Keep it up!
And of the Disneys, the first one they head is to a crossover to Aladdin's location.
If you have a writer’s block, I already did Disney crossover with Red Alert 3 with Soviet perspective.
I should point out there's a few minor bits of grammar issues, like how some of the sentences drag in places. For example:
But otherwise, as an introduction to this concept of the possibility of Disney's and MLP's planets literally merging together through unknown circumstances is fascinating for fans of the MLP/Disney crossover genre. Plus, I find it would make absolute sense to have Yen Sid and Princess Celestia meeting face-to-face, as they are well respected figures in their own separate continuities.
Though while I see there's an attempt to make it sound like an account from Yen Sid as if he were documenting this event as a journal entry, some sentences should've been better off as actual 'dialogue' instead of merely implying what is being said between the two figures. But other than that, it is a very decent read for a prologue at least. I just sincerely hope that if you ever look back on this chapter, as a means to reflect, maybe you'll determine if this chapter could've been brought together properly.
For these two worlds, life for each of their inhabitants feels like any other day. Everyone we know and love going about their own business without a care in the world. Next thing you know, their planets start to collide disrupting all of their daily activities (Magic fading, power going off, etc.). Neither of them know that a great change is dawning upon them, a series of events that may in fact alter everything they know (At least in this canon anyway). And the moment Mickey Mouse and Twilight Sparkle first meet in this very instance, they have every right to feel confused just as what is going on. But if we know how these stories generally turn out, they answer may come much sooner than they expected.
As everyone gets well acquainted with one another, featuring characters we already know and some subtle introductions of some new cast members on the MLP side, it soon dawns upon the group that the merging of their worlds may not have been coincidental. Even though there was not much that could be done to prevent what has happened, this merge now opens opportunity for the heroes we know and love to learn from one another, explore their cultures, and perhaps have a better understand as to why they were brought together to begin with. Sentence structure and grammar issues aside, this chapter adds to the lead-up of what is to come for this story as we await anxiously to know what is soon to occur.
And we definitely know these series of events LONG after the third season, but just before all the other major events happened (Such as Twilight being a princess, getting a castle, gaining a student in a former enemy, starting a school, etc.) so hopefully that's enough clarification for new readers just finding this story. In a way, it makes this story feel dated for sure but bear in mind that this was years before any of the major stuff we've grown accustomed to ever happened.
I'm just nitpicking here but I believe it's 'Huey, Dewey, and Louie'. Easy mistake, but just thought I'd let you know.
So until there comes a means of splitting off the planets in order to restore the things the way they were, the two groups will definitely have many adjustments to make. Of course, I don't blame the lot for being concerned about the unknown. Even if the chances of yet another star colliding into their systems, considering they are in enough of a pickle as it is, there are still many dangers that neither group are aware of (The Disney Universe don't know of the many dangers they've yet to see in Equestria, just as the Equestrians don't know of what lies in the borders of Disney). But soon they are about to learn as Rarity has been invited to make dresses for the Sultan's daughter, Jasmine (Word definitely travels fast indeed). And if we know Agrabah, it 'is' a land filled with magic and wonder, but danger lurks around every corner all the same.
As part of the first bit of adventures in this story, our groups would be wise to proceed to Agrabah with caution. They have no idea what they'll expect. Well Mickey and his friends probably do, but in this canon the ponies have no idea what they're in for.
When we think about it, even though one would think the collision of two worlds would make it big, in a way it's still pretty small. It would beg the question of the other planets looming around the atmosphere and if something similar were to happen would the increase in population truly make what they've known all their lives feel even smaller. Either way, there is much of the unknown each party has yet to uncover but even so that's what makes the adventure all the more exciting for both sets of friends. Plus, no story like this would be complete without a musical number to set the mood of the series (Even if it drives us crazy hearing it over and over at the theme parks). Still, based on the message of the track, there is some well thought out meaning when we take the time to think of 'why' it was developed in the first place.
As far as this new pony is concerned, Silver Dream, a great destiny lies in store for her even if she is blissfully unaware of her purpose. Even Yen Sid and Celestia can feel this aura that is not entirely evil but could alter the course of the series if it develops. Fans may read this story and see this as an MLP/Disney crossover featuring our favorite stars as the main subject. But for me, I do believe it's the 'fresher' characters that were introduced that may assist in driving the plot along. Whatever the road has in store for Silver Dream, when even the Elements of Harmony or Mickey's magic (Along with the talents of his friends) won't be enough, it may be up to her to symbolize the difference between victory and defeat.
'Made', not 'make'.
Ah yes, now this is what I appreciate about fan stories like this. It's one thing to keep with the original source material, but given the popularity of the broadway musical based on this feature (Which gone on for a Tony Award nomination) it would make sense to incorporate a few elements of the stage production for creative purposes. No sooner do the group make it onto the borders of Agrabah that what suddenly becomes a straight path to the palace takes a leap of fate when a mysterious peddler deliberately separates the pack before they can act. One group finds themselves on the streets where everyone is attempting to make a living, leaving the rest to proceed to the palace before them. Something big is definitely happening for both parties, even if one group knows of this place more than their new friends.
I am anxious to see how this turns out.
There are definitely two takeaways from this chapter alone: Even though this sequence takes place around the 'beginning' of Aladdin it acknowledges several events that already happened in an attempt to create some originality and even though this beyond their jurisdiction, of course our groups would want to do something based on what each have seen. In Rarity's case, even though they achieved their goal and delivered the dresses to the princess, she can tell that the princess has been miserable with her being forced to marry a suitor arranged by her father just so she can take over the land. Now needless to say, Rarity has had rotten luck when it comes to Romance but seeing this woman in such distress of course she'd want to help.
As for the other group, if the idea was to make a decent impression in their first trip to 'Agrabah', least for the ponies anyway, they definitely made enemies out of the guards for aiding a felon, in which case 'Aladdin'. If we thought the stealing bread crime was rough in this movie, you should see how it's handled in 'Les Miserables' (Five years initially, but an additional fifteen years for attempting to escape). Anyways, as if that wasn't enough, they just happen to run into Ole Jafar who's proposing a deal to help Aladdin get rich so that he can reunite with Jasmine as a wealthy man with enough gold to 'persuade' the sultan to allow him to marry. After all, most fathers would want their daughters to marry a wealthy man.
Boy Minnie really jinxed it this time. Of course, Mickey and the gang were already en route to uncover this cave with the promise to help Aladdin recover a lamp from the old man (Who doesn't quite introduce himself as Jafar at this point) and in return he'd be rewarded handsomely for his efforts. Course they don't know they pretty much walked to their potential graves knowing it takes one act of pressure to take more than what they are going in to retrieve and who's to say they'll get their reward? But still, when a friend is in need these chaps will do anything.
As for the remainder of their group, once they got Jasmine's side of the story of how she met this young man and what's possibly going to happen to him if he gets caught, they know they immediately have to act. Not only to convince the Sultan that Jafar's intentions are not what's best for the kingdom, but also the fact that this young man is someone Jasmine truly cares about and would do anything to ensure his freedom. I don't know what's going to happen next shortly after this story, but I'd like to believe that these 'Tales' still hold some merit.
If and when it's been determined to draw back into these set of stories again, I would love to see where the adventure leads these two groups. After all, if there's one thing I've come to learn from being on this site, everyone 'hates' cliffhangers.