You know what? I'm having a reeeeeeally hard time formulating a solid opinion about this. Let me just make it clear right now that I am not in any way, shape, or form, bashing this fic. I'm just really confused about this to the point that I need help on how to face this.
Let's start with the OC shall we? Really nice OC ((I looked her up and all that stuff)), nice colors, pretty cutie mark symbolic and all. But there's one problem. I can't seem to understand whether this is a joke OC, an OC made for humourous purposes, a serious OC, or something in between those or something else entirely. And of course I'm not entirely against the ridiculous headcanon of "destinities" that makes me want to vomit because that's just me. Personal headcanon is that names are given similarly to the native Americans.
Now passing that I have a respectably hard time figuring out what this story's intention is. Is it glorified no-sense clop? Is it a serious fic? What is the aim of said fic? Where do we go from here? How does the tale end? Regardless it seems to be written well... adequately... That is despite the fact that there are all kinds of WRONG shit going on in here but some of my bias comes from societal influence. Regardless of that I don't know if I should just enjoy the ride of this fic, or just turn around and leave because of the "slut" part.
And before you respond I'm honestly trying my best to avoid societal bias when talking about this fic, and I'm not exactly against the clop stuff. I mean I clopped to this so... that.
I just don't know... In all honesty I've lost all my ability to "can" with this fic to the point that I don't find it funny anymore. It's not that I haven't read other fics where despicable things happen. I've read "Maternal Instinct" where Chrysalis basically hits her own child, but that's a clearly wrong thing. This fic however confuses the Bejeezus out of me and I'm certainly not sure if I should hate this character for behaving like this, or hate the things that happen to disrespect her as a mare, or just be happy she has some "standards" in her cocksucking.
Most people here enjoy this fic for the irony of it. I am not sure I can however. Maybe I'm thinking this over too much.
5981764 She is a confirmed joke character. The joke is essentially "what if a pony's talent was being a whore?" I'm taking that joke and exploring it a bit more. It is still definitely a joke, but following that thread to its conclusion has a lot of consequences, like "How does she get her cutie mark in the first place?" If you have an answer to that question that doesn't involve something horribly "wrong" but still stays true to the idea of foals getting their cutie marks at relatively young ages, please let me know, because I couldn't find one.
So a part of it is shameless clop. But it's also a story about being true to yourself. Like it or hate it.
5981785 Well at least I know how to treat this story.
but following that thread to its conclusion has a lot of consequences, like "How does she get her cutie mark in the first place?" If you have an answer to that question that doesn't involve something horribly "wrong" but still stays true to the idea of foals getting their cutie marks at relatively young ages, please let me know, because I couldn't find one.
Ever heard of the "attunement" quests in World of Warcraft? I believe it is more of a matter of synchronisation of a pony's magic with the mana of the world. As a unicorn grows or a pegasus flies they learn and use their magic appropriately and it ends up allowing them a clearer use of their magic. Sort of like finding the right key to the lock.
Now for the cutie mark how it appears. I believe that said "key" is permanently inputted upon a pony's flank and thus taking away someone's magic takes away that "key", and disables their magic. You may choose to think of it as an elaborate form of rune/symbol thingie. Dunno... Sounds good?
5981764 I think the story boils down to being the biography of a well-meaning slut/super-hero of sex. (The last bit is a mite exaggerated, but you get the point.)
5981844 Right... you know what this reminds me? "Clara Da Noite" or "Claire of the Night"? She's a whore with a child from one of her encounters and is like super funny about the whole thing.
I remember I used to read her comics brought in among others in a newspaper's part that was about comics. One of the tales said about a really expensive toy that her kid wanted and she had to fuck a bunch of guys to get it but the kid wanted it from Santa only so her mom didn't work. There was another that was a dream about a dinosaur wanting to fuck her but she wanted him to have a condom and he says "Now I understand why we went extinct!". And finally there's the story where she catches her child reading comics late and dreams about becoming a whore-super hero called "Whore-Woman"! It was hilarious with her requests thank her by donating into her secret account.
No, seriously, though: you've taken a clickbait story about a joke OC and turned it into something sweet and hot and touching and, dare I say it, sincere. This is some good clop, but it's also one of the nicest clop stories I've read, even as it owns its ridiculousness. Reminds me quite a bit of Ember's.
As a person who personally doesn't understand clop at all, and avoids it like the plague... I clicked this thinking it would be satire, with no explicit scenes or at the very least limited ones. Now I realize that I was only half right (I think?), and honestly I don't know how to feel after reading this.
It was certainly super awkward when I linked it to my friends though.
So why doesn't the story have a sound track to go with it? Must be several on Youtube that would work, especially after she's asked what her name is...
a good quality clop with a plot and a solid storyline... The story of a mare living up to her cutie mark in a what if situation... Nicely crafted with humour in it. I really get this story. I really do and so far you expanded it nicely. I want to say it is a clopfic but when reaching the concluding chapter, you even placed in a somewhat twisted moral for her that shows she is not fully into the sex scene.
Just because she is cockslut does not mean she would be a bitchy cockslut. Nicely crafted and hope to pursue more of this story should you continue it.
Honestly, I just kinda want her to meet Celestia some time, only for the wizened leader to invite her for tea, drape a wing around her and start chatting about her old friends 'insert bad sex puns here.' Silly, but eh.
Great story. Really hot, and I absolutely loved it. Though oral sex isn't my favorite fetish in clopfics, you did a really nice job pulling this off. And you didn't just do sodomy either. You also did anal and traditional vaginal, which was... wow.
Excellent descriptive details. There were only a few typos that I caught, so you might want to look over it because I forgot where they were.
Honestly, if your friends are that sensitive and judgmental about what you do and how you enjoy yourself, actual clopper or not, then you have attracted a fairly low quality of friend. It's one thing to have an opinion about your friends' interests, but to the point where they're scared of those opinions shows shit has gone too far in said friend circle. You should not have to feel like you need to hide anything or risk being ostracized, that's for acquaintances and strangers - not friends. If you are that skittish about any labels and applied negativity those labels come with in regards to your friends, then your friends have failed you.
Best line of the entire chapter. ^_^
Such a sweetie.
*reads new chapter*
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Oh my gosh, this is... I can even... like why is this a thing? It was hilarious, hot, and just so strange. Upvoted and favorited.
You know what? I'm having a reeeeeeally hard time formulating a solid opinion about this. Let me just make it clear right now that I am not in any way, shape, or form, bashing this fic. I'm just really confused about this to the point that I need help on how to face this.
Let's start with the OC shall we? Really nice OC ((I looked her up and all that stuff)), nice colors, pretty cutie mark symbolic and all. But there's one problem. I can't seem to understand whether this is a joke OC, an OC made for humourous purposes, a serious OC, or something in between those or something else entirely. And of course I'm not entirely against the ridiculous headcanon of "destinities" that makes me want to vomit because that's just me. Personal headcanon is that names are given similarly to the native Americans.
Now passing that I have a respectably hard time figuring out what this story's intention is. Is it glorified no-sense clop? Is it a serious fic? What is the aim of said fic? Where do we go from here? How does the tale end? Regardless it seems to be written well... adequately... That is despite the fact that there are all kinds of WRONG shit going on in here but some of my bias comes from societal influence. Regardless of that I don't know if I should just enjoy the ride of this fic, or just turn around and leave because of the "slut" part.
And before you respond I'm honestly trying my best to avoid societal bias when talking about this fic, and I'm not exactly against the clop stuff. I mean I clopped to this so... that.
I just don't know... In all honesty I've lost all my ability to "can" with this fic to the point that I don't find it funny anymore. It's not that I haven't read other fics where despicable things happen. I've read "Maternal Instinct" where Chrysalis basically hits her own child, but that's a clearly wrong thing. This fic however confuses the Bejeezus out of me and I'm certainly not sure if I should hate this character for behaving like this, or hate the things that happen to disrespect her as a mare, or just be happy she has some "standards" in her cocksucking.
Most people here enjoy this fic for the irony of it. I am not sure I can however. Maybe I'm thinking this over too much.
I'm the cook.
5979543 You... are not alone. Look in my comment below.
5981764 She is a confirmed joke character. The joke is essentially "what if a pony's talent was being a whore?" I'm taking that joke and exploring it a bit more. It is still definitely a joke, but following that thread to its conclusion has a lot of consequences, like "How does she get her cutie mark in the first place?" If you have an answer to that question that doesn't involve something horribly "wrong" but still stays true to the idea of foals getting their cutie marks at relatively young ages, please let me know, because I couldn't find one.
So a part of it is shameless clop. But it's also a story about being true to yourself. Like it or hate it.
Don't get preggers Deepy! You're too innocent... err, too nice for this world!
5981785 Well at least I know how to treat this story.
Ever heard of the "attunement" quests in World of Warcraft? I believe it is more of a matter of synchronisation of a pony's magic with the mana of the world. As a unicorn grows or a pegasus flies they learn and use their magic appropriately and it ends up allowing them a clearer use of their magic. Sort of like finding the right key to the lock.
Now for the cutie mark how it appears. I believe that said "key" is permanently inputted upon a pony's flank and thus taking away someone's magic takes away that "key", and disables their magic. You may choose to think of it as an elaborate form of rune/symbol thingie. Dunno... Sounds good?
5981796 Pregnancy risk fetish is something people enjoy. I doubt she will tho.
5981764 I think the story boils down to being the biography of a well-meaning slut/super-hero of sex. (The last bit is a mite exaggerated, but you get the point.)
5981844 Right... you know what this reminds me? "Clara Da Noite" or "Claire of the Night"? She's a whore with a child from one of her encounters and is like super funny about the whole thing.
I remember I used to read her comics brought in among others in a newspaper's part that was about comics. One of the tales said about a really expensive toy that her kid wanted and she had to fuck a bunch of guys to get it but the kid wanted it from Santa only so her mom didn't work. There was another that was a dream about a dinosaur wanting to fuck her but she wanted him to have a condom and he says "Now I understand why we went extinct!". And finally there's the story where she catches her child reading comics late and dreams about becoming a whore-super hero called "Whore-Woman"! It was hilarious with her requests thank her by donating into her secret account.
It was glorious.
5981785
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No, seriously, though: you've taken a clickbait story about a joke OC and turned it into something sweet and hot and touching and, dare I say it, sincere. This is some good clop, but it's also one of the nicest clop stories I've read, even as it owns its ridiculousness. Reminds me quite a bit of Ember's.
while reading this, please listen to "ode to joy" its perfect
As a person who personally doesn't understand clop at all, and avoids it like the plague...
I clicked this thinking it would be satire, with no explicit scenes or at the very least limited ones. Now I realize that I was only half right (I think?), and honestly I don't know how to feel after reading this.
It was certainly super awkward when I linked it to my friends though.
I'm torn between wanting to read this out of curiosity, but not wanting to read this because i'm 99% certain this is sending me straight to hell
5981785
So why doesn't the story have a sound track to go with it? Must be several on Youtube that would work, especially after she's asked what her name is...
I feel nervous adding this to my library.
All my friends will think I'm a clopper now.
5982299 You're not the only one. I'm here for the plot, skipped some sucking here and there.
That should be "he".
a good quality clop with a plot and a solid storyline... The story of a mare living up to her cutie mark in a what if situation... Nicely crafted with humour in it. I really get this story. I really do and so far you expanded it nicely. I want to say it is a clopfic but when reaching the concluding chapter, you even placed in a somewhat twisted moral for her that shows she is not fully into the sex scene.
Just because she is cockslut does not mean she would be a bitchy cockslut. Nicely crafted and hope to pursue more of this story should you continue it.
Honestly, I just kinda want her to meet Celestia some time, only for the wizened leader to invite her for tea, drape a wing around her and start chatting about her old friends 'insert bad sex puns here.' Silly, but eh.
This has been hilarious so far! I wonder how Deepy would react to seeing a Human for the first time.
I feel so dirty after reading this.
Upvote!
This is glorious,
Bless your heart for writing this fic mate. :D
Great story. Really hot, and I absolutely loved it. Though oral sex isn't my favorite fetish in clopfics, you did a really nice job pulling this off. And you didn't just do sodomy either. You also did anal and traditional vaginal, which was... wow.
Excellent descriptive details. There were only a few typos that I caught, so you might want to look over it because I forgot where they were.
~ Laurel Rose
5982167 If you're at this page you're already 99% of the way there. Sorry bud. :/
I keep reading Destiny as the name of a pony.
5983016
Uh... Double Penetration isn't all that unusual in porn, even clop.
5981811
Just pictured a foal finishing some great quest to get attuned to Blackcock Spire. Thanks Nio, you're not helping.
5982299
Honestly, if your friends are that sensitive and judgmental about what you do and how you enjoy yourself, actual clopper or not, then you have attracted a fairly low quality of friend. It's one thing to have an opinion about your friends' interests, but to the point where they're scared of those opinions shows shit has gone too far in said friend circle. You should not have to feel like you need to hide anything or risk being ostracized, that's for acquaintances and strangers - not friends. If you are that skittish about any labels and applied negativity those labels come with in regards to your friends, then your friends have failed you.
5982299
not to worry. you are only a clopper if you write it. otherwise, you just read and enjoy. ... at least that is how -I- see it..
opinions differ, millage may vary
5982167 You know with a name like that and on this page.... Welcome to hell, that 1%
5983630 I think that's epic. Why is that bad? I think it's hilarious.
5983864
It's not bad. It's just not helping with the imagery! My brain runs away with shit.
I like how she isn't going to do ponies who are in relationships. Also, I find this hilarious.
5983909 Right :D I understand!
5983920
Little Deepy is growing up to be an ethical slut. I'm so proud.
5983610 Only if with a pony who does not have DC's special talent.
That was so hilarousing!
5983610 shhhhhhh
5984318
Why would you let people know you read MLP fanfiction? It's not exactly something you should be proud of.
If you enjoyed this story, please consider checking out "Ask Deepthroat Cockslut" on tumblr!
You can find it here: Here!
There should be an update posted later today
Is it just me, or does Deepthroat Cockslut carry a disturbing amount of power for a character that started as a quickdraw joke on Tumblr...?
This..I witnessed her creation and now she is a fanfic....FUCKING EPIC!
I can't even but I will.
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That's all.
Excuse me while I change my underpants.