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TheBronywiththeBowTie


Just a brony who likes writing! And fancy neckware.

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It is a period of Civil War. Rebel spaceships, striking from a hidden base, have won their first victory against the evil Galactic Empire. During the battle, rebel spies managed to steal secret plans to the Empires Ultimate Weapon, the DEATH STAR, an armored space station with enough power to destroy an entire planet. Pursued by the Empire's sinister agents, Prince Soarin races home aboard his spaceship, custodian of the stolen plans that can save his people and restore freedom to the galaxy.....

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

So far, you've made some interesting character choices so far, and I like 'em! Having Nightmare Moon as Vader is nice. I'm guessing Celestia will be the Obi-Wan? Anyhoo, this is pretty well-written and well-paced, and it fits in with the main Star Wars story really well. Can't wait to see the next chapter! I leave you a thumbs-up!

This is surprisingly good. Too many ponified versions would copy the films verbatim. You avoid that problem completely, So I'm very happy. Can't wait for the next one.

The story continues! I like the way this is going! Can't wait to see what happens next!

"You are part of the Rebel Alliance and a traitor!" Nightmare Moon shouted, angered by Soarin's continued attempts at lying to her. "Take her away!"

Should be him, not her.

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