After the fail attack Queen Chrysalis launched on canterlot, a hated half-breed is finally free of his Changeling family, but after wandering in the woods after the blast he finds himself in a curious situation.
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- Member Since 19th Mar, 2012
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Quite Quaint
Hello! Imma right stuff! TO THE COUCH!
Quite Quaint
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Meh.
you said Pinkie instead of Twilight, also it all seems rushed
I tell almost every new writer this. Please. Please for the love of Celestia, Space and indent your paragraphs. It makes reading SO much easier.
Oopsies! I'll go back and reedit it, I guess my impatience got to the better of me.
Good story so far. I like it.
HAHA! Fixed it! Also added in a few more bits for extra detail
not bad start. makes me wanna read more...make more chapters!