This is a story about myths and legends coming to Equestria! Some pony has to save Equestria from internal darkness and that is miss.Twilight Sparkle!
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This is a story about myths and legends coming to Equestria! Some pony has to save Equestria from internal darkness and that is miss.Twilight Sparkle!
The story feels a bit rushe, but i do like your idea. also, you should get an editor
5711593 I had an editor that did not do anything, but they would be a good one.
Yeah, the thing is you're rushing this, and then the character's emotions, they're sounding too flat.
Better than your last one, but this is a little rushed.
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5711593 I agree
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5711593 The editor will edit the next one though.
5712837 yeah I hate when that happens when u get a bad editor who does nothing until u find a good one u stick with that editor.