Scootaloo has always idolized Rainbow Dash.
When an opportunity comes up for Scootaloo to win a pair of VIP tickets to a Wonderbolts show by showing off her skills on her scooter, there isn't a moment's hesitation in the young filly's heart. She can't imagine any way she would rather spend time with her hero. But getting there will be harder than she bargained for.
They say to shoot for the moon because even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. What they forget to mention, though, is that the stars are very far apart, and it's very cold and lonely everywhere in between.
Very cute first chapter! You can definitely feel the admiration in Scootaloo's eyes for Dash. Then again it's hard not to be impressed by her!
You ALWAYS buy lemonade from the stand with misspellings and cutie fillies. I mean Bloom is wearing an adorable bow for Celestia's sake!
"Aw, shucks! Even though our profit margin surpasses the industry by two-thousand percent fold, still no cutie mark! What do we do now?"
"Don't worry girls! I have a plan!"
CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS POLITICAL LOBBYISTS!
and once again, the kids are brushed to the side with half-assed reasoning.
I love Scootaloo stories, so you don't have to do much to hook me. But this needs longer chapters. There's a good story in here but it's lost with how quickly everything is told.
Well one thing is true in this chapter. Scootaloo is really high in the clouds.
Good story so far!
beautiful start, I have my interest piqued
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true, can’t argue with that
oh dear, what have you done scoots, taking a cig from honeydew? You’re going to have magical effects happen to you
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ahahahahahahaha good one!
the cig is making you go crazy scoots
the narcotics from the cigs...
it’s cuz scootaloo is smoking the poison joke cigs, applebloom!
I have a feeling that applebloom is going to tell her sister about scootaloo smoking at such a young age, I’ll be honest I like scootaloo, and this is a good story, but once you get hooked on smoking, it’s addictive
you paid the price scootaloo tsk tsk tsk
thus begin the final chapter