I am awesome, don't deny it, I'm starkillers apprentice, I can force repulse you into next year!
when a normal Brony feels like life is a never ending cycle, he will find light in a place he thought never to exist.
This story is written in first person, it will be affected by the things I read and watch, and is a "Made up as I go along" Style of story.
Edit: Changed rating to teen because of future chapters.
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MOAR PLZ
need to work more on the mane 6 and their own attitudes. spelling mistakes and dont keep adding \i say to the end of sentences try something like "That's strange" I placed my hand on the door. rather to "'Thats strange" I say out loud. Good luck
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Thank's for your input.
I'm working on becoming a better writer, and if you look at my other stories, you can see the improvement.
Yes, i'm not the best writer, but neither am I the worst.
I will try to take into account what you said for the next chapter, which I have no Idea what to do for.
What i'm getting at is, I have a plan, and I need to fill the gaps in the storyline, communication being the main way to do so.
basically, I have a Chapter 3 ready to be typed, but not a chapter 2.
Push Rainbowdash off a Skyscraper
DO IT!
908685 why would I do that? 1. She could just fly to not hit the ground. 2. She would come back to kill ME!
Keep it up, love this story