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A little bit of Encouragement

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In a world of magical talking ponies, eventually everypony around will break into song and dance. And for those that don't join the festivities, somepony is bound to notice.

And for an unlucky Royal Guardspony, the one to notice his lack of gaiety just happens to be somepony you wouldn't want to disappoint. Will he be able to avoid being pulled into the raucous ruckus by this persistent pony? Or will his world be rocked by the rhythm of music found in everypony?

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Ri2

Ri2 #1 · Jun 6th, 2015 · · ·

A pony that doesn't want to sing or dance? Unthinkable!

The Rutherford

The Rutherford #2 · Jun 6th, 2015 · · ·

This has my rapt attention. I look forward to more.

garfan

garfan #3 · Jun 7th, 2015 · · ·

it's not bad, but your lyrics... aren't great. They're doing stuff like flipping the normal syntax way to much

Emeralddragon2

Emeralddragon2 #4 · Jun 7th, 2015 · · ·

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To quote many famous lyricists,

"Lyrics are hard"

But while I was writing the 'lyrics', I was focused mostly on making them fit the story, and at least having the hint that they were being sung by the characters taking part. Besides, without any literal music for the lyrics, the 'songs' are very open to interpretation.