Part One of "The Reasoning" Trilogy.
How was the draconequus known as "Discord" created? Thanks to Spike's childish persistence, Twilight gets the chance to find answers, but what she finds is like nothing what she, or anypony else expected.
Join Twilight and Spike as they find the truth to the creation of Discord, to a time before even Luna and Celestia were brought to this world, and how a simple prankster pony, a power hungry king, a curious scientist, and many others, link towards the great Draconequus.
Chapters (8)
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Interesting story, but you really must use proper spelling and grammar.
For example, "He walked into the kitchen, and opened a draw full of the gems he so loved to eat. He shoved a few into his mouth and closed the draw..."
I think you mean "drawer."
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... Thank you for that information. Though I re-read it a couple of times, sadly, I got no one else to do so. I asked, sadly they rejected
... Perhaps you would like to do that?
LORD DISCORD NEVER EXISTED!? what have you done twilight!?
Not bad, I'm looking forward to the next chapter and can't wait to see where this story goes. I hope you are able to fix the grammatical errors that do occur in your writing, but don't worry there not too distracting.
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Ehe.... heheh... Heh..... I really need an Editor or a Proof Reader. I can't spell at all
552783 I wouldn't mind doing proof reading. All I do is just read other people stories and nothing else on this site so I'm always looking for something new to do.
This gonna be good, like!
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Finally, someone helpful. Now, do you have a Skype? It would be easier to do all this if you did, if not, we can do this via pm and such. You up for it?
553094 I don't have a Skype account, sorry but if there's some other way you wanna do this then please tell me. And I'm always up to help others, especially when it come to MLP.
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Ah. Oh well. Perhaps Private Messaging? Or email? Therefor I can send them to you, and you can send them back with proper grammar and all. Sound good?
553191 Uh sure, email or Private Messaging will be fine with me.
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Alright, I just sent an email. It may be slow, but hopefully your receive it.
553231 I just got it and am currently working on it. I should have it done and sent to you by tomorrow. And I sent you an email so I'm not sure if you got that or not.
Besides a few spelling errors, this seems really promising! Keep up the good work.
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Sure. Although I'm not really sure how i could proofread an unpublished chapter, or even if i can somehow edit it myself. i would be glad to do so to the best of my ability.
Random story is random.
Chapter one bro. Chapter three is where the description lies. So hold your hors-- uh, ponies.
554490 well, I already have a proof reader now, but thanks for accepting. Maybe I'll contact you on my next fanfic. IF I write another fanfic.
FIRST POST!!!!
What happened to Equestria?
Holy cow this is great!
This is turning into a very interesting story. It will be fun to see how all of the different time lines and characters fit together. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks.
And guess what?
It only gets better.
By my grandmother's holy jumping Applejack bananas, it updated!
I like the new take on the elements, too.
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Dun dun duuuuuuuun~! Well, prepare for something that shall blow your mind. Hehe, if I even get the next chapter in. Having two FanFictions is a pain. I wish I had two of me. Making them would be so much easier.
It looks like some of the characters' stories are beginning to come together. Can't wait to see what happens next!
I think I see where Discord got his mean streak from.
New characters to fit into this interesting story...I like.
Unfortunately, there are a lot of grammatical and sentence fluency errors in this chapter that detracts a bit from the story.
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I need an editor then, I guess. Tried writing to to keep up with the pace.
Heh...
I like Simon. He's an interesting character.
Nice! I'm liking the new characters. I can't put together how Discord fits into all this, but I'm sure we'll get to that in time. Which means, we need more...
Hey man, I wanted to apologize about the times I took forever to proofread. And I haven't heard from you in a while and thought you rage-quit. XD Anyways, I'm looking forward to the rewrite and hope it turns out well.
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Well, technically I did. But I've got too much planned for this story just for it to disappear. Gonna rewrite this one, publish a new one, and continue the only story I haven't cancelled. I'll get you to proof read the rewrite.
2087601 You still want me to proofread? I am honored good sir and am looking forward to it. And please remember to send it to my hotmail account.
On fanfiction.net huh? You mind sending me a link to your user page?
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Just click my avatar.
2536271 I did. All I saw was a link to your deviantart page.
2538168 Thats odd. Here. http://www.fimfiction.net/user/The%20Truth%20of%20Chaos
2614457 Ah, let me rephrase that: There's no link to your fanfiction.net page on your profile. Either way, nothing's changed.
2615692 OH! Oh dear, I'm sorry. I mis read what you said. I have shamed myself. I did have an account on Fanfiction, however, I no longer use it, and prefer this site instead.