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Alternate realities


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Comment posted by Furry Communist deleted Jan 26th, 2015
Comment posted by Alternate realities deleted Jan 26th, 2015
Comment posted by Furry Communist deleted Jan 26th, 2015

Not gonna take it seriously, but painfully is another thing entirely. Honestly, this was pretty good for just a random and silly RP. If they had lived, you could've made a short joke series with the two. :rainbowlaugh:

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wow, such criticism. :(

R.I.P humor of humanity. I know this story isn't really a story, that's why I said don't take it seriously. If you guys prefer well written stories and novels, perhaps you should stick to professional writers such as George R.R. Martin and Tolkien, instead of wasting your time on Fimfiction. Not saying Fimfiction doesn't have good writers, but when I say in the description don't take something seriously, you guys should take that advice instead of holding this trash story up to your usual standards. Seriously if you don't want to make constructive criticisms, which i totally understand, then refrain from posting. Effort still went into this, even if it was very little, and I personally feel this story is still better than some of the unreadable stories on Fimfiction.

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Yes it SHOULD matter if my story is not to be taken seriously. It simply means that you should not hold it to the same standards of normal stories or the standards that you usually read at, regardless of whether effort was put in or not. Its all in good fun, and I am not looking for serious critique of it.

And why does comment deleting matter so much to you? Like I said I don't appreciate people coming here and just dissing how this sucks when it is SUPPOSED to suck. Why don't you just drop the pretentious and holier than thou attitude, and just leave quietly if my story's illegibility and 'lack of effort' ticks you off so much?

Lol wow delete city on the comments here.

Just read the part with the hospital horrors in the OG story and remembered this existed.

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