Seriously, this shit is some grade A lulclop. Well-written, decent pace, hilarity abounding and just heavy enough on the smut to keep it the right side of a PWP story.
One thought that crossed my mind was having him oblivious for a while, then getting the girls into a meeting to admit to knowing exactly what was going on the whole time and he gave up waiting for them to admit to it.
Or they meet together with him and confess, only to find he was playing along because it was hilarious to someone from a male-dominated society.
There are a few other options, including absolute obliviousness. Or getting kidnapped by Princesses.
5534956 It doesn't have to. In fact, there never was any chloroform. He was just dehydrated, started to space out and then just passed out at the table. Everyone was very concerned.
...Well, aside from Fluttershy bring creepy as hell...this has been hilarious! Then again, maybe it's just that I'm a frustrated male, but with the possibility of dealing with the horny mares and with proper preparation...well, I'd be ok with this situation...at least to an extent.
That said, I'd need an Enforcer on my payrolls conditioned for total obedience, via favors of the raunchy kind. I'm thinking domination type stimulation to keep them submissive, but otherwise...yeah, not the worst situation. In this case, it's all about reading the situation...and Anon can't read worth a damn...poor guy...
What can I say..........this needs to keep going, you got it out of the box you can't put it back.
I mean what happens with Spike in this world with his claws, what will all the other stallions say when they find out what's happing. So many questions with this new world.
But on the other hand as much as writers put the name Anon in it is starting to get a little old, it's so we could think of it as us but I would just be fine with a name.
anyway you my friend get a keep up the good work and I'm sure anyone would help if you asked to proof read.
How is anyone supposed to know what chloroform smells like? Every time I try to find out I just black out and wake up later in a ditch with my wallet missing.
wow Anon is getting shit on. No respect these ponies I swear. Still want to see what happens now. I mean chloroform only affects a target if they get a large enough dose and begins to wear off immediately after taking the rag away... provided they wake up at all... and with a functioning liver. it doesn't affect memory in any way.
X'D tears of laught dear fellows ! Tears of laught ! X'D
By the way, the thing about humans sucking out magic power is pretty fun. Can't wait for what's coming next ! ( please, tell me that Luna will also join in ! XD )
wow Anon is getting shit on. No respect these ponies I swear. Still want to see what happens now. I mean chloroform only affects a target if they get a large enough dose and begins to wear off immediately after taking the rag away... provided they wake up at all... and with a functioning liver. it doesn't affect memory in any way.
That's probably what the "hoovies" are for....The chloroform is just to make him unconscious so they can get the hoovies in him..
In fact most every mare in the place had their hooves down under their tables, including one stallion sitting near the carrot cake display in the corner.
When I read this the first time I did not give this particular line much though but the second time.... I though he was just fapping but... ya he isn't doing what I think he is doing right? But anyway lol
5544889 Luna. Why do you think she went Nightmare? Her sister was hogging the Royal Hare- I mean, overworked the guards! Yeah, the guards... And then she was stuck on the moon all by her lonesome for a thousand years.
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(psss...what is hoofies?)
FINALLY! A VIRGIN! not much other mare.
Funny.
Oh good it's not over
i have to do this im sorry, im a chemist and i have to do this
chloroform doesnt cause memory loss, anon would still remember.
IM SORRY PLEASE DONT HATE ME!
Please sir, can we has sum MOAR?!!!
Seriously, this shit is some grade A lulclop. Well-written, decent pace, hilarity abounding and just heavy enough on the smut to keep it the right side of a PWP story.
Yeah, ok, when it comes to drugging and raping the poor bastard, even I'm not thinking it's particularly funny anymore.
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Roofies.
So is it complete or not?
Well that was an interesting trip.
One thought that crossed my mind was having him oblivious for a while, then getting the girls into a meeting to admit to knowing exactly what was going on the whole time and he gave up waiting for them to admit to it.
Or they meet together with him and confess, only to find he was playing along because it was hilarious to someone from a male-dominated society.
There are a few other options, including absolute obliviousness. Or getting kidnapped by Princesses.
Fucking Fluttershy XD.
Well at least he didn't answer yes.
5534956 would it at least cause him to pass out so he doesn't come to the realisation of what's happening around him there?
Damn. Even with that heat I didn't realize Fluttershy had those kinds of guts.
5535044 I really like the idea that he was playing along with it for shits and giggles as someone from a male dominated society.
5534956 It doesn't have to. In fact, there never was any chloroform. He was just dehydrated, started to space out and then just passed out at the table. Everyone was very concerned.
OH BOY, this fic is sooooo FUNNY! XD
Please keep going :3
Soo awesome. Now im hooked to this story, more please.
Flutterrapist is best fluttershy.
5535459 I was waiting for him to smirk and go "Let me ask you all a question when did you think i would find out" while "polishing" her horn.
Well I was getting a boner, but all the bad grammar killed it.
I hope your happy.
Y'know I think it would be funnier if he did know what was going on, but acted oblivious cause he, too, gets a thrill out of it.
And my mind just went to a dark place. In our society, aparantly a woman cannot rape a man. Now if the roles are reversed here, and Anon knows it...
Note: I do not believe in that statement above.
Anon: Shit....
It's always the quiet ones
...Well, aside from Fluttershy bring creepy as hell...this has been hilarious! Then again, maybe it's just that I'm a frustrated male, but with the possibility of dealing with the horny mares and with proper preparation...well, I'd be ok with this situation...at least to an extent.
That said, I'd need an Enforcer on my payrolls conditioned for total obedience, via favors of the raunchy kind. I'm thinking domination type stimulation to keep them submissive, but otherwise...yeah, not the worst situation. In this case, it's all about reading the situation...and Anon can't read worth a damn...poor guy...
What can I say..........this needs to keep going, you got it out of the box you can't put it back.
I mean what happens with Spike in this world with his claws, what will all the other stallions say when they find out what's happing.
So many questions with this new world.
But on the other hand as much as writers put the name Anon in it is starting to get a little old, it's so we could think of it as us but I would just be fine with a name.
anyway you my friend get a keep up the good work and I'm sure anyone would help if you asked to proof read.
about all that disclaimer crap at the beginning...
I don't care!
I like the story and will defend it from haters!
so stop feeling so down on yourself!
or else!
Please continue this it's too good to stop
How is anyone supposed to know what chloroform smells like? Every time I try to find out I just black out and wake up later in a ditch with my wallet missing.
This is really good.
Ihadfun/10 will keep reading
YES!! FLUTTERRAPE IS A THING HERE! I LOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIIIIIT!!!
yes let the true darkness begin.
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I wouldn't recommend it. It really sticks to your hands.
This story is like a train wreck: you hate it, yet you can't stop looking at it.
Thumbs up!
Well. That happened. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.
5534872 actually, I think applejack meant she didn't have a stallion for over a year, unfortunately the search for the Virgin mares continues.
Poor Anon he had to find out the hard way
wow Anon is getting shit on. No respect these ponies I swear.
Still want to see what happens now. I mean chloroform only affects a target if they get a large enough dose and begins to wear off immediately after taking the rag away... provided they wake up at all... and with a functioning liver. it doesn't affect memory in any way.
X'D tears of laught dear fellows ! Tears of laught ! X'D
By the way, the thing about humans sucking out magic power is pretty fun. Can't wait for what's coming next ! ( please, tell me that Luna will also join in ! XD )
Brain: Listen carefully Anon! You're in terrible terrible dang-*Chloroform Spike*
well that was evil
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Awww. Now who could've downvoted a comment like that???
Although it would've been awesome to see the reaction on everypony's faces if had said "yes"
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That's probably what the "hoovies" are for....The chloroform is just to make him unconscious so they can get the hoovies in him..
Oh man this is hilarious.
When I read this the first time I did not give this particular line much though but the second time....
I though he was just fapping but... ya he isn't doing what I think he is doing right?
But anyway lol
5534956
Thanks for telling me. I'll have to keep that in mind if I ever need to use any.
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Luna. Why do you think she went Nightmare? Her sister was hogging the Royal Hare- I mean, overworked the guards! Yeah, the guards...
And then she was stuck on the moon all by her lonesome for a thousand years.
I really shouldn't be laughing at this kind of thing. Bravo at making me anyway.
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IKR! She's soooo discreet too! LOLOLOLOLOLOL
Oh Luna, it hurts to laugh!
I was sitting on my white throne when I read this, then I lost my shit laughing