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Sodas story

This will be a story based around the life of my O.C. Sodapop and it will be (attempting) to be from the 3rd person perspective,also i'm sorry if there are any grammar/punctuation errors i haven't quite mastered the english language.

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ThunderWonder

ThunderWonder #1 · Dec 30th, 2014 · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

Your grammar is pretty bad, so you might wanna get an editor to help you. The description suggests that you aren't a native speaker of the English language though, so it's certainly understandable. Props to you for learning a new language. Might I ask what language you originally speak? I'm just curious.

I like the base concept for this story, as it could be pretty fun, but the pacing just isn't all that great. Still can't bring myself to click the dislike button on this story, but I also can't like it either. Good luck with learning the English language!

cloudlionheart

cloudlionheart #2 · Jan 14th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2 ·

5441890 thank you very much for your input sir or madam,my first language is Italian thank you for asking and I'm sorry I couldn't answer earlier a lot has been happening with me Which is why I won't be able to add on to it very often.