Two stories that I've made. Dash's Lifestyle and Are You Afraid of Love, all of which contain Rainbow Dash! :3
I like to write stories about MLP: FIM and I love drawing them too.
Two stories that I've made. Dash's Lifestyle and Are You Afraid of Love, all of which contain Rainbow Dash! :3
Too short, too rushed, poor grammar. Find a proofreader- or, if you want a review, join a review group.
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*join this group*
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Yes, I know. Rushed as it is it's still clear. Poor grammar? Oh I'm sorry I haven't learned any of that grammar. I try to do my best, thank you for your concerns. I'm sorry that I'm being snappy, but I know. I've just started and am trying to figure out how this works, alright? I'll fix it later. Oh and too short is called a short story. I was in a rush to get it finished. Also I don't want a proof reader I want to learn how to do it on my own so that I know that I can do it.
Again sorry for being snappy, these comments just bug me off.
Okay, the first one was alright. This one felt like it was just being forced to being this long. Now, if I may offer some advice, when you switch who is speaking, you should start a new paragraph. For example This,
should be this
Also, that bold part should be "I".
5431885 Alrighty. Thank you. Forced? Sorta. I'm only in 7th grade, I wouldn't know, I'm just know starting on writing in my lit/language arts class.
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Seventh Grade?
Um, how old are you?
5432018 does age really matter in a Fandom where 20+ year Olds watch MLP?
5432018 Why should I tell you? My mom tells me not to tell other people, but if you really want to know I'll be 14 in March.
5432113 I'll figure it out.
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Ok. I thought you were underaged for this site, seeing as how this is a 13+ site.
5433373 Nah. I'm big on rules.
5435302 I'll think about it.