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Since the events of "That Tuesday Morning," Twilight has become increasingly intrigued in time travel. However an apparent spell backfire creates an anomaly that throws Twilight into an unknown corner of time. Here she finds an Equestria where neither sun nor moon rises, and great powerful goddesses shatter the land. What can Twilight possibly do to save Equestria from this dark future, where friends have become powerful enemies.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

Interesting, interesting...
Keep up the good work!
Nice use of cliffhangers by the way. Cant wait for the next one!

I'm interested to see where this goes. So on that note:

MOOAAAR!!! :flutterrage:

Pinkie! Did you mess with reality again? You know youre not supposed to be a princess, right?... Right?
Some cliffhanger you got going on here! Ah well, thems the breaks with time travel. Cliffhangers everywhere.


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Oh crap. What a horrifying existence those poor ponies lead... :pinkiecrazy:

This story deserves way more views. I hope you work on this story more. :pinkiehappy:

Pinkie Pie as an alicorn. Pretty strange, but hey, alternate universe and all. Have a moustache before I've even finished the other 2 chapters. :moustache:

Wow, who knew Pinkie could lose it like that. I'm using too many moustaches, so I'll use this duck face. :duck:

Is this story gone forever? Seemed like an interesting beginning.

The description didnt hook me, but your other stories have been amazing so i'll read it anyways :pinkiesmile:

Please do more of this! Its an amazing concept. Why are you on hiatus!?!?

Via

." twilight whispered

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As the Nova Corp officer said in the Guardians of the Galaxy trailer, What the Hell?

Why does this feel like a wrinkle in time?

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