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Abraman


I guess I'll write something maybe

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Set sometime between the events of Keep Calm and Flutter On and Magical Mystery Cure, a crisis looms over Equestria. An entire village has been reported missing to the west. As Twilight and co. investigate, it seems more settlements will suffer the same fate as the first. Princess Celestia puts Twilight in charge of the investigation, and it's up to her and her friends to discover the cause of these disappearances, and put it to rest once and for all.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

I can see a lot happening with a plot like this. Great job! Deserves a track. :pinkiehappy:

Nice. You have my attention..

can't wait to see where this goes

Looks great! Keep it up! My only complaint is that the mane six should've at least learned a bit more about why this is happening before baltimare dissipeared. A entire city seems a lot bigger than a village.

Why wouldn't they inform the crown of what they found... Then step through the portal?

5550843 Mmm, good question. I'll have to fix that. Thanks.

Seeing how long I went between chapters 2 and 3, that could take anywhere from a day to the collapse of our sun, but whatever

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