I proofread. Sometimes I write, but that's rare.
What if the story was flipped? What if Celestia attacked Luna, what if Celestia was jealous, what if Luna was the one who seemed to be loved more?
What if Nightmare Moon never existed, and her story was all a lie?
Finally got to writing this. Thank goodness summer break exists.
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I vote for another chapter
me too!
Not worth it, at least not in my opinion.
Your chapters are too short, your writing mediocre at best which is what I expected from such short chapters anyway, and your overall ability to flesh out a story is little to none. I'm sorry, but if you want to write anything of even moderate quality, you need to make some major improvements to your writing.
6100569 Thanks for the feedback! Sorry about that, I can never get my stories right. >.<
6101022 It's okay. If you ever want any advice, I might be able to help you out a bit.
6101030 Yes, please! I'm always tryingtrying to improve my writing skills! I help people with grammar and spelling, but I can never get pretty much everything else right myself. >.<
6101055 I'm about to go to bed, but next time you want to write something or even if you want to redo this story, just PM me.
An intriguing story.