They did it. They defeated the Id. But four out of six fell, and their spirits transcended to another world. They have found an afterlife, with their predecessors from mellenia ago. Yet, they are drawn to the real world, where they have to watch from behind a wall as those they left behind work through their loss.
You know for your first story, this is pretty good
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Thank you. I have had writing experience before, but this is my first pony fan fic.
I think this is good, especially considering it's your first story :) Faved and followed xx
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Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!
This is a sequel to something, right? The synopsis makes it sound like it is.
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No, it's not a sequel, though I can see why you might think it is.
I have only finished the first chapter, but this seems very interesting! Sad, but I like sad stories.
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To give a basic rundown, it's essentially a creature that feeds on good emotions. I'll go into more detail through the story, and perhaps in other stories.