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To say that Snails has always been a little different from most ponies would certainly not come as a surprise to most. But is it what's on the outside that marks him as different, or what goes on on the inside?

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wat.

FAVOURITED!

NONO DO-

*favorited*

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I'm glad one of them liked it :pinkiehappy:

Wow, so well described. I myself have been one for detail, so you certainly have me hooked. May I ask where this story is going?
Great job, honestly:ajsmug:

Lets see where this is going, shall we?

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I'll always read fanfics about my best friend's bud. Especially when it involves both!

Nice Job, you made some great descriptions and I like the set up.
Thank you for taking the time to write this good luck in the future.

Just as a note, this story may not update right away due to the fact that I have a job/other things to do, and I want to ensure the chapter is as good as I can get it before I post it.

On a side note: Thank you all for helping me get my first story under the "Popular Stories" tab. I luv y'all :heart:

What happened to the second chapter? I remember reading it, but now I can't see it anymore.

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To put it simply, I just didn't like it. A common theme that I tend to have with my stories is that I start off really well, and then kinda fall apart as I go on. I don't think the second chapter really fit well with the first, which is a shame really. I really want to do this story to the full extent that I wanted to, because the third chapter was meant to have the most impact on the reader.

Without spoiling too much, it had to do with Snail's relationship with his father.

I might go back and rewrite the chapter to be more polished and enjoyable, but I just have so many different story ideas that I want to start (and just as many that I still need to FINISH) that it might be a while. I'm sorry to anyone who really did enjoy the chapter and was hoping for a climax soon.

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