The Sugarcube Corner rarely has any problems, but Cloudy Skies has had a self esteem problem for a long time. And when she doesn't talk her problems out, they start to fester deep inside her mind and physically starts to show. Will it help when her twin Sugar Rush steps in to make sure she doesn't have to deal with this battle on her own?
This story features humanized characters from Kilala97's Alternate Universe( http://kilala97.deviantart.com/ ). It will also get kinda dark in later chapters.
Cover Art by Kilala97: http://kilala97.deviantart.com/
Chapters (2)
Haven't read it yet (I'll comment again when I do) but I noticed in the description that you say "but" way too often. It leads to run-on sentences and kinda draws away the focus, so I'd recommend you fix that. (Sorry if I came off as harsh; didn't mean it, so please don't take offense)
5174717 I realized that after I posted it. Thank you, though. I will let you know that it doesn't use "but" that I often... That I remember.
Whew, I thought it was over!
I thought "Wat. Is this how it ends." but now I realize it's incomplete. xD
Cute so far.
One thing shocked me though: THEY EAT BACON AND SAUSAGE??? OnO
5175683 No problem... and even if you can't remember it, it's still there.
5176392 It's gonna keep going. xD And they are human in this, so yeah. Because bacon is amazing.
5178314 Oh riiiight.... They're huumaaansss
5179811 Yup.
They touch stuff with hands, not hooves.
This is an amazing character study into the often overlooked topic that is depression. I'm especially looking forward to later installments and seeing the younger next gen characters.
5358637 Thank you.
Hopefully I stop being lazy and actually write more often.