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Harmony771
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Interesting so far...
The chapters could be longer, but so far it has kept my attention. Gonna keep an eye on this one.
Grammar and sentence structure need a good deal of work. But other than that, it's alright.
oh my god this is fan-freaking-tastic! please write more
You've intrigued me, something very few people have managed to do.
This needs quite a bit of editing done on it.
How much does editing matter to you?
5445242 I'm not very good at grammar okay. No need to be rude about it.
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It's difficult to express oneself through text, as 90% of communication is nonverbal. As such, I must apologize for not making myself clearer. I had forgotten that most of the world uses questions to attack people.
This was not that. I meant it only as a question. I have done editing before, and have often approached the matter by offering a few editing slips, and asking if someone wants help. Most times the author says that they don't care, and want to leave the story the way it is. I opened with the question because I want to see if you are going to want my help, or if you're going to tell me to shove off like everyone else. I'm not fond of wasting words, so I tried to be efficient.
My apologies for the misunderstanding.
5445382 Oh, I didn't realise, I would love your help
Longer chapters, please. Good story!
While the grammar and pacing could be better, I am intrested to see where this goes. Nice job!
Once again, grammar and pacing. But other than that, this story is great so far!
Longer chapters would be appreciated, I am really interested in seeing where this leads ^w^