Twilight and her friends go to visit there lost friend pinkie

How much does editing matter to you?

5445242 I'm not very good at grammar okay. No need to be rude about it.

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It's difficult to express oneself through text, as 90% of communication is nonverbal. As such, I must apologize for not making myself clearer. I had forgotten that most of the world uses questions to attack people.

This was not that. I meant it only as a question. I have done editing before, and have often approached the matter by offering a few editing slips, and asking if someone wants help. Most times the author says that they don't care, and want to leave the story the way it is. I opened with the question because I want to see if you are going to want my help, or if you're going to tell me to shove off like everyone else. I'm not fond of wasting words, so I tried to be efficient.

My apologies for the misunderstanding.

5445382 Oh, I didn't realise, I would love your help

Longer chapters, please. Good story!

Longer chapters would be appreciated, I am really interested in seeing where this leads ^w^