An author, editor, and Star Wars extraordinaire. I am a Jedi, like my father before me.
Admiral Scootaloo had been given a final chance to crush the Rebels and save her own life. But can she face the fear of death with honor and dignity?
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Too Short........
wow, i'm a little surprised this has so many downvotes? I mean, I didn't think it was that bad.
by biggest complaint is that scootalo was basically just a servant of the republic and she had two friends and that she had a good sense of duty. she was more of a cardboard cutout with friends than an actual character.
it also seemed a bit rushed, but it stayed together pretty well, and I dint find any grammar mistakes.
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It was based off of Admiral Gilad Pellaeon for the characterization. He was a bit more characterized in the Star Wars universe, as he had dozens of books and hundreds of comics that he appeared in. I didn't have some huge plot, so it ended a bit short.
5166365 I noticed it was based of that particular Admiral in StarWars. Well done with this by the way. you have my Up vote