She had a name, a job, hobbies, normal life, and so on and so forth. Whatever. That's all unimportant now, because some jerk Chaos god decided that Equestria needed a new villain.
Well, if he wants a villain, he's going to get one! CUE DRAMATIC MUSIC STING!
Yeah, violence!
love it!
This is pretty damn charming. Which might be a euphemism for 'unprofessional' and 'amateurish', but I'm having a lot more fun reading it than a lot of things more traditionally 'good', so keep it up.
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Bit of a backhanded compliment, but I'll take it!
It probably doesn't help that the POV character isn't the most...collected pony around. Gives the impression of even more errors than there already are.
Well, short's fine so long as you update consistently, but your update schedule looks about as good as mine, so I'll just sit over here being a kettle.
I'm kinda curious about how much she remembers the Evil Overlord List, or if she even read it at all. If she didn't, maybe she could start compiling one of her own?
Looking forward to more.