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bejammin2000


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When Nightmare Moon came to be, she was not alone. She had managed to gather quite the force with her.

1000 years later and said force is now the majority of Princess Luna's Night Court... while still being Nightmare Moon loyalists.

Perhaps another Princess could show them the error of their wicked ways.

Or perhaps they might show her the harmony found in evil.

Warning: My writing style is pretty stream of consciousness, so there will be many instances of no dialogue, just omniscient prose detailing mild minutia, but nothing as serious of pages and pages of detailing how green grass is.

Completely unbeta'd, and for that matter, title is subject to change if someone can suggest a better one. Expect an update when I feel like I'm not the only one paying attention.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 12 )

Any tags? Coverart maybe? A good idea, but maybe pretty up the intro page, that's your main hook after all.

I wouldn't know which tags to use. It's not really dark... despite the fact that a group of lawful evil not quite ponies are going to try and make Twilight evil.

And it's not really slice of life, either. Since it's a political drama/comedy.

Hrm. Must look at the tag options and give it another go.

As for cover art... ha. Hahaha. Mine is a sad laff.

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I like your ideas for the story. Please do continue.

I like your idea and where the storyline is going, and you should add a teensy bit more, as a junior writer would say, "slice of life", maybe to humanize (or ponyize) Luna. I'm upvoting and favorite-ing, don't let me down!

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:3 Also I became editor and I agree, GREAT STORY YOU'VE GOT THERE! :3 :derpytongue2::derpytongue2: MY RATING IS 10/10 MOUSTACHES (SO FAR) :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

twilight in a few chapters
"new princess is a tyrant" in the news

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That's pretty much what the Council wants.

Anyway... not sure if the other members of the Mane 6 should be brought in, but currently I'm leaning towards no at the moment.

You update fast what's your secret:pinkiecrazy: and no soul selling I have enough debts to deal with already.

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I just write. I've been writing it every day. Usually I post right after I'm finished writing.

It's not really a trick, there's no outline to follow or anything. It's just a stream of conscious thing.

(Hell, I might even post another chapter later tonight...)

Thanks for readin'!

You're welcome

You sure there be no soul selling I couldn't write that fast if my life depended on it I also enjoy your writing style

Ah Twilight Sparkle, All anypony needs to do is give you enough rope and you'll not only hang yourself, but also produce a particularly artistic form of shibari at the same time.

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