• Published 29th Aug 2014
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Voice Your Complaints After the Beep - Arya Stark



Angel the rabbit has been part of a killer cult on Mission Dom, determined to dominate the world, starting with the Mane 6. But when the time comes to kill Fluttershy, can the rabbit go through with it?

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After the Beep....

As I started to fade, the messages rang in my ear….


Message #1;‘Hi, this is Angel, voice your complaints after the beep.’

Hey, you furry menace of fluff, it’s Trixie, haven’t heard from you in a while. Was wondering if you are still on board for the whole Mission Dom thing? If so, the group meets on Sunday, so see if you can escape your little Miss Stutter-shy there to meet up with us. Ok? See you then, trouble!

Message # 2 ;‘Hi, this is Angel, voice your complaints after the beep.’

Greetings Miss Angel, how fares our little minion? Well, I hope. Just calling in to check up on you…that being said, where are you? Sunday approaches very soon and the gang needs to know if you are on board. If you could call me back or at least one of us soon as possible at your earliest convenience, it would be much appreciated. My extension is 205.
Until we hear from you, this has been Chrysalis.

Message # 3 ;‘Hi, this is Angel, voice your complaints after the beep.’

Angel…its Discord. Where are you, cotton tail? I think I found your email on how to trigger Luna’s…dark side, heh, quite useful and successful. Nightmare Moon will soon be among our ranks, and then, we will truly be able to pull this off! Mission Dom owes you much gratitude; we are in your debt. See you Sunday!

Message #4; ‘Hi, this is Angel, voice your complaints after the beep.’

5 days! 5 days till the big day! Super excited, are you? OMG, email me! Because Tier wants pics of the big event when it happens, and I know your Fluttershy has one- a camera, I mean. Think you could nab it? Don’t worry, we will return it, but it’s not like she will be missing it after…hehehe… Heart ya! Oh, this was Tiara speaking.

Message 5; ‘Hi, this is Angel, voice your complaints after the beep.’
Tiara again; OMG, did I see you and your pony out today. Were you grooming her? Ew, never mind, don’t want to know, don’t care to know. Keeping up an act until the big day, I suppose, eh? Keep it up. Ciao, darling.

Message 6; ‘Hi, this is Angel, voice your complaints after the beep’

Hello?...Hello? Uh, this is Tierk, are you there? Blasted machines, don’t know how they work. Hope you get this, runt.
You were fabulous yesterday, I am pleased with ‘Cords choice in naming you Head Hoof, er, Paw in your case. I doubted you, yes, but yesterday, you proved your worth quite wonderfully. Glad to have you on board, and can’t wait to see what fabulous schemes you make up for the horribly wonderful ending of those rotten ponies.

The blinking stopped after that message, signifying the end of the voicemails. Gritting my teeth, I forced myself to hop across the room, my paws bloody as I hacked onto Fluttershy’s computer – mine, now I suppose. I was blocked by passwords, but I keyed in a guess all the same, getting it correct by keying in ‘Frienship’. Ha, so predictable…A few more key strokes and I was into my secret email. Huh, missed a bunch here too…
The black spots in front of my eyes made it hard to read, but I managed.

Fr; DiTia
To; AngelCarrot

Angel,

The package has been sent to your little secret burrow, and everything should be in there, but just in case, here is a list of things that need to be in that box;

Gas
Rope
Matches
Masks and cloaks (yours is embroidered ‘Bunny Devil’ hope you like it!! Up to you to deliver the others, by the way.)
Small dagger carrots – new edition in the Royal Guard that Nighmare Moon managed to swipe ‘fer ya, hope you put them to use.
Gloves

That should be it, if anything is missing, email or call me!
Love,

Diamond Tiara


Fr; Queen4Life
To; AngelCarrot

Angel,

What is fire, and why does it burn??

I can NOT get the image of that wonderful, glorious fire out of my mind! It sends shivers down my spine just to remember the sight of it, how the whole farm went up in flames like THAT! And the screams…the screams! Never smelled burning flesh before, and I probably would have been more disgusted if I wasn’t distracted by the sight of the damn Applejack running around set completely on fire. That was a sight to behold, and so thrilled we got that on camera! Wonder if the news print would take it from us as an ominous for the press? I mean, those lame pics in the news showing the after math of the mess does the scene no justice, truly.

I suppose it is all you’re doing though, with your nightly doses of gas around the area…Well done, my fine furry friend, well done!
One down, 5 to go, eh? Sparkle is next, don’t forget the rope!
~Chrysalis


Fr; BullBadass
To; AngelCarrot

Who knew ponies could make that noise. It was a mix between a squeal-squeak-choking noise if you ask me. Not quite sure, but all in know is it was wonderful!

Once again, your skills won us out – I think they should make lassoing flying ponies a sport! ‘Dash didn’t even see it coming, did she? And lashing down her wings like that – brilliant! For one so small, you do have quite a bit of strength in you. And darkness! You have quite the side of you that you didn’t show much in those meetings, it was a joy to see you finally hop out of your shell. Really, I wish Chrys would have captured the look on your face when that azure pony hung; your smirk, rabbit, your smirk.

Cold satisfaction is a great feeling, isn’t it?

Tata, little minion, 2 down, 4 to go!!
-Tirek


Fr; NightMoonMare
To; AngelCarrot
I’d just like to inform you how luxurious and lovely it is here, having the castle all to myself.

I have never felt so alive. Oh how my heart pounded when I slipped that poison into her cup! And she didn’t suspect a thing! I was dreadfully nervous; what if I didn’t get it past the sun -shine Celestia or her royal guards? But, two ponies with one stone, we did it! I didn’t expect Celestia to join Miss Sparkle for tea, but yet fate had it happen, didn’t it?

Oh, it is wonderful to stretch my wings and rule as I have always wanted! No more hot blazing sun to block out my glorious moon…this really, dear is too much for me, the gratitude I feel towards you is immense. To think of one little rabbit capable of making such a high skilled poison that even the test cooks couldn’t detect! You are talented, my little rodent, very talented. (Yes, I know, rabbits aren’t technically rodents, but the name suits you.)

Come visit sometime!

~Nightmare Moon
P.S; 3 Down, 3 to go!


Fr; Trx4Kids
To; AngelCarrot

Princess Celstia
Twilight Sparkle
Apple Jack
Rainbow Dash
Pinkie Pie
Fluttershy
Rarity

Who thought a pony who defies all law of physics with overabundance of exuberance that is reflected in a high squeaky voice couldn’t swim. Death by drowning….You think of it all, bunny, you truly do. Well done. See you Sunday, when it is all said and done.
~Trixie


Fr; BullBadass
To; AngelCarrot

Angel,

So glad her vanity gets in the way. Still, death by sewing needles? You ARE really one demented little rabbit….
May Rarity’s kind be rare indeed….

-Tierk


I was about to click on the next message, when out of the corner of my eye, there was a blinking. Turning my gaze, I saw the phone light blinking, signaling within just a few minutes, I had missed a call.
Several calls, in fact….

Hi, this is Angel, leave your complaints after the beep.

Hey, its Nightmare, pick up the phone, will you dear? I know you are home…we want to know how it went!

Hi, this is Angel, leave your complaints after the beep.

…Getting cold paws, minion? Come on, it has been 48 hours since your assignment; we need to know if the deed is done. This should be the easiest of all of them, minon, don’t fail us now…
Call back when it is done, extension is 205.

Hi, this is Angel, leave your complaints after the beep.

Angel? Its Trix….haven’t heard from you, did all go well? Hope so, ‘Fly is gonna be the last of them, and then we can truly celebrate…Call me! Ciao.

Hi, this is Angel, leave your complaints after the beep.

Hey Ange, it’s me, Tiara! Listen, I know you are probably totally nervous about this last one, I mean, you DID live with her, and I’m sure you have feelings and all, but remember, this is for the better of ponykind, ok? If you need support, I am here. Email me or something, ok? Stay strong, furball!!

Hi, this is Angel, leave your complaints after the beep.

Angel? We are getting worried over here…is it done or not??

Hi, this is Angel, leave your complaints after the beep.

OMG, you are totally getting cold paws, aren’t you? Bunny, you were so strong, you can’t back out now!! GET IT DONE!!

Hi, this is Angel, leave your complaints after the beep.

Let me remind you, minion, if you don’t get the job done, then you will have to be replaced by more capable hooves. Don’t tell me you are finally developing feelings for that mare, are you? Don’t disappoint me, rabbit. You don’t want to disappoint me….

Extension 205. Call back.

The rest of the messages, I didn’t hear. By then the pool of blood was too full by then.

-EQUESTRIA DAILY NEWSPAPER-
September 28th
Obituary;
Princess Twilight, Princess Celestia, Apple Jack, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Angel the Rabbit.

Author's Note:

Just something that has been hopping around in my twisted mind, you don't see much of Angel around here, and wanted to try her out a bit.

Comments ( 34 )

That was overly gruesome in my opinion, and seemed a bit rushed. Maybe if you showed Angle having regrets for what he's done, or didn't make the deaths so painful sounding. Sorry, but this got a thumbs down from me. :applejackunsure:

4923811 Thanks for your opinion!! At least you explained why. Thanks!!

4924053 Your welcome. I just wanted to leave some constructive criticism, and I'm glad you read it! :twilightsmile:

Arya Stark first I like the story it really got my blood boiling which is a good thing it means that you made the villains so despicable I got angry and second I have to ask you a question I plan on writing a story that has to do with the villains of the series and was wondering if I could us the "Mission Dom" name for the group. let me know please and thanks :pinkiehappy:

4924696 Glad it got your blood boiling! I consider it a personal achievement if I can mess with the reader's emotions...

And sure, use Mission Dom, I am sure that it is not a original name, I am sure many people have used it. ><

Also, it would be totally cool if we maybe co-authored in something? I mean if you are gonna use villians and my Mission Dom name....

Just a thought.

Thanks for the read! Be sure to thumbs up or fav it if you feel it is worthy! (Every author has their vain moment of self promotion....)

~A.S

4924716 Sure I'd like to work with you and if you're talking about the story I'm planning on writing I have to ask have you seen The Hitcher the 2007 movie and Hannibal Rising another 2007 movie (ironic huh?:yay:) because those title characters will be a big part of the story.:ajsmug:

4924753 No I have not :(

4924157 Then again, it was SUPPOSED to be dark and gruesome (ergo the tag, yeah?) , but the rushed comment, I definitely will take into account. Thanks again!

4924797 Should check them out good movies in my opinion anyway I'll give you credit for giving me the idea to add two more characters to the mix.

4924842 PM me if you want to collaborate something up!! :twilightsmile:

4924827 I have no problems with dark stories, it's just the extremely gory ones like Rainbow Factory, Cupcakes, and, to a much lesser extent, Fallout Equestria that get me.

4924911 Really? Don't know how to put this...but this is not dark...at ALL...compared to what I could have done/ what goes around in my mind....the THEORY is dark, the actual writing was mild, at least I thought.

Oh well, thanks again for the opinion.

4924917 Well sir, you have me terrified now... :pinkiegasp:

4925162 Um....I'm...I'm a girl.... XD

4925177 Okay then: Well Madame, you have terrified me now... um... uh... :derpyderp1: :rainbowlaugh:

"Just something that's been hopping around in my head"

... I see what you did there. :moustache:

4926204 Heh, good, someone who gets my sense of humor :derpytongue2:

4928299 What the fuck?
4924053 story is pretty good, a little speedy, but good

4928299 That....is going to be the newest weapons we use in the army, I declare it now!

Who needs bombs? Send over the bunnies and DROWN THE ENEMIES IN THE FUR!!

4929252

I suppose Game of Thrones might have dumbed down my senses to where I don't have as much of a churning reaction to the bad guys winning.

TOO TRUE!! TOO TRUE!!

I wanna say its cute. Just cause he didn't kill Fluttershy. I wanna, but since best mane 6 is Rarity I just can't. Honestly didn't see that ending though. And the callsigns/nicknames were fun, especially Tirek's "BullBadass."

To be honest, I thought she was gonna kill Fluttershy (I didn't wanna wish it because Fluttershy's my favorite) but wow, that was one hell of a twist in my opinion. I loved how you formatted it with the ID Caller giving us little details about how Angel killed off everyone. Is it bad I actually laughed when they mentioned Pinkie's death...hm may need to get checked on that one but still an awesome story.:pinkiehappy:

5079002 Thank you! I didn't know how to do Pinkie's death for awhile, but I figured hey, she defies all laws of EVERYTHING, so have fun killing her simply for once.

No, you aren't messed up laughing at it, because I DID write it, so if anyone is messed up... ^^

5079018 Thanks, and keep making stories if you can, they're really good.:twilightsheepish:

5079024 My second best one is Sisters Forever, but my best SHORT ones are To Be Her Riders Legs or Fran-sass

5079068 I'm reading To Be Her Riders Legs right now.:twilightsmile:

5079117 please consider adding another chapter called "...Leave a Message"! showing the other's reactions to his (Angel's male btw) death!:raritystarry:

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