We're in Equestria!

For reasons I can not dwell on this story is cancelled. I find myself unable to finish this story. I am Sorry.

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Dark Willow

Dark Willow #1 · Sep 9th, 2014 · · · Prologue: What used to be a normal blog chat.... ·

good chapter to start with

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Heartless Jay

Heartless Jay #3 · Sep 9th, 2014 · · · Prologue: What used to be a normal blog chat.... ·

4978754 thanks, it would have technically been out a while ago, but I'm a procrastinator.

blue blood dj

blue blood dj #4 · Sep 9th, 2014 · · · Prologue: What used to be a normal blog chat.... ·

I really like this chapter good work.

Heartless Jay

Heartless Jay #5 · Sep 9th, 2014 · · · Prologue: What used to be a normal blog chat.... ·

4979085 Thanks.

PinkPearl

PinkPearl #6 · Sep 10th, 2014 · · 3 · Prologue: What used to be a normal blog chat.... ·

it's horribly fast paced and it lacks details. it's good start but i say go over your work before you put it up.

Heartless Jay

Heartless Jay #7 · Sep 10th, 2014 · · · Prologue: What used to be a normal blog chat.... ·

4979645 I plan on it, but I make no promises.

Evan

Evan #8 · Sep 23rd, 2014 · · · Prologue: What used to be a normal blog chat.... ·

I had a little trouble keeping track of all the characters, but good story idea. Do you have someone to help you edit each chapter before you post them? It would greatly improve the quality of your writing.

Heartless Jay

Heartless Jay #9 · Sep 23rd, 2014 · · · Prologue: What used to be a normal blog chat.... ·

5043270 I plan on splitting the character's into groups later on, so to easier keep track of them. No, I have no editor.... Forever Alone

theFlancy Mernin

theFlancy Mernin #10 · Sep 27th, 2014 · · · Prologue: What used to be a normal blog chat.... ·

Aww, I would have loved to edit for you... I'm intrigued as to why you can't continue your story, but it isn't any of my business. I hope that you can return soon.

Heartless Jay

Heartless Jay #11 · Sep 27th, 2014 · · · Prologue: What used to be a normal blog chat.... ·

5062586 That's very kind of you to offer. The information as to why I cancelled the story really isn't mine to give. I thank you for your understanding.

theFlancy Mernin