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She didn't lock rhe basement door?
oh shit
Well she's screwed.
and now we start a game of arachnephobia! it's an easy game, whenever you see an animated spider you scream your head off. ready...set...scream!
I got to say, I loved the fight sequence and I hope this isn't the last time we see the twins, as I liked the way they teased Connor. Also, I enjoyed Luna and Connor's cute moments. Keep up the good job.
P.S: Luna is RIPPED.
Someone might wanna call Fluttershy...NOW!
Fantastic, I'm really enjoying the character development. Might be my favorite Luna I've read
to quote Connor "God damn it, Luna."
Either it's just a coicidence or something else, but I think that you, my good author, have watched AoT Abridged
The amount of references is over 9000
4982026 Just guess since my scouter broke. 9002
I spy with my little eye:
RWBY, Attack on Titan Abridged, Gears of War and I am sure that there are others that I have missed >.>
faileyour
Revenge served cold.
The next moring will be a good morning, a very good, expect: not for Luna and him
Heh that ending dow my reaction when Luna keeps going in his mind... "FUUUCKING LUUUUUUUUUUNAAAA GET OUT OF MY HEAD"
Damn it Luna, LOCK THE FUCKING DOOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What in the 7 hells is in that basement, more then spiders? I'd hope not.
....
shit...........
RWBY Volume 2 reference!!!
4982238 Oh,jack is in the basement...He's not really dangerous,He's just /reaaaaally/ huggy...and doesn't like showers.
All the references! This pleases us greatly! I love this story and the fight scene was pretty good.
dosent connor know of any exterminators? Heck I'd say next chapter when he wakes up he is going to be like this!
I really like this story but, if you let me, may i make some critics ?
In the fight scene, you repeated "Connor" a lot of times. Not wrong, but odd and breaks the rythm. The fight scene was well developed and used well the "time" in it but, then, when Connor comes home, a lot of things happens almost at the same time, breaking such rythm. IMHO you could make less things happen (the virus things was unecessary, you could just make the healing scene, then dinner, then Luna´s letting the basement door open).
Other then that all background characters are fun, Connor is receiving a good background history, and Luna is starting to have a relationship in a well-timed way. Thanks for the update, just don´t rush too much, you have time and the story have a good timing so far.
very mortal kombatish especially right at the end of the fight. I look forward to your next chapter
And tonight's nightmare has Luna turning into a swarm of spiders that crawl all over him!
For one thing, Benz.
For another...
Six minutes seven seconds. 6:07.
I think you mean Knight.
(Remembers there's a bunch of giant spiders down there)
... Ah fuck.
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4982829 my thoughts exactly
Dis man is my hero
SWEET MOTHER TERESA ON THE HOOD OF A MERCEDES BEZ!
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It's the eye of the tiger the thrill of the fight!
SOMEPONY CALL SOMEPONY CAUSE WE GOT SHIT THAT'S GOIN' DOWN SOON!!!!!
Out
Had
Luna should have played enough horror games to know that forgetting 1 single thing will result in death or spooks
Great story! Loving it so far, but I do see some mistakes. All of them, however, only deal with spelling, word choice or grammar. I hope you continue this story in this direction, as it is only the grammar and spelling, not the creative storyline, that are being poorly represented. Perhaps going over the lines twice or asking for an editor would improve the quality. Other than that, great story, can't wait to see what happens next. PS The "Sweet Mother Teresa on the hood of a Marcadies Beinz" quote made my day, thank you for adding it.
Oh, is it that time again already? It's Review Time:
I wonder how many times this is gonna happen in this story?(a lot.)
Perfectly missed opportunity to use the 'Leggo My Eggo' reference.
I really hope that all this hype you're putting in Connor's injuries won't fall short.
Caramel sure does love eating Apple Pie.
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I'm a little confused. I thought they were trying to hook up Connor with Luna, so why are they getting other mares to hook up with him?
Don't think I don't know where you got that song from.
Just smile and wave.
Ah, the age of chivalry is not yet dead.
I know this is from something, but I can't remember.*end of review*
Very entertaining chapter. Had plenty of sexual comedy, character development, and action. Now just got to wait to see what happens when a house is overrun by evil spiders.
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4984994 The stallions are just trying to get Connor laid, they don't care with who. I've recently been playing Metal Gear Rising: Revengence, but I do know that you used that song in your fic. As for the final reference, Its from LOTR: Return of the king.
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Is the game good? I can get the game for $20 which is basically saying it sucks since it came out sometime ago. As for the reference the first sentence is from LOTR but not the other sentence.
4986509 It's okay. You mean the space and time thing? South Park and the Stick of Truth.
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Ha, I knew it! Would I have to play any other metal gear games to know what's going on?
4986533 Not really, I haven't played them. Unfortunately, I hear they're amazing.
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How is it unfortunate if they're amazing?
4986877 Damn it. Must have cut that part out. I meant unfortunately I haven't played any of them, but I hear they're amazing.
Very good chapter, I look forward to the next chapter. (I am a Tf2 player myself but all i care for are HATS.)
Oh, yes. That basement door shall be their downfall.
That's some chonky buisness right there
Dodgey!
4989935 favorite class?
5000100 I have no favorite class, i just like to play the game and collect hats. (most played class is scout, most decorated char is heavy)
If you put in this my fimfiction user name u can find me on steam (just replace the e 4 a 3
Congrats, you made me go back and watch the food fight again. Sweet Luna do I love RWBY. lol