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Nice chapter. Nice references. ... First. I love being first on my favorite stories, sorry. It's just like... I won, and I got to read this pure awesomeness as soon as it updated! Yeah!
"Oh sorry, it’s just that I hear these speeches so often that I’ve compiled them into a list of how often I hear them.” The human could see the vein in the Queen’s head pressing against her skin in anger."
Really dude? :D
Conner did a frezia on changeling butt didn't he?
We miss one back story and got another. But I notice much references in here.
Lol. Connor tried to do that Braveheart scene. But failed XD
Absolutely love the chapter.
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PLEASE tell me you're making this shit up and that was not apart of the chapter...Please.
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chrysalis: stop it
Connor: no
chrysalis: stop it
Connor: nno
chrysalis: stop it!
Connor: pfft
awesome red vs. blue references
Dragonball Z Season 2, Abridged.
...And to think I wouldn't have known that a mere two weeks ago.
And we skip over Connor making good on his promise to tell Twilight and Cadence about his "never going back in a cell" comment.
I hope this blank gets filled in rather soon, otherwise I feel it would have been better if he was not shown making good on his promise.
Chekhov's gun elements in written stories stand out quite a bit, and I sincerely hope this isn't one.
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It was in there alright!
Lets check the score counter...
RvB quotes - 2 to 3
DBZ Abridged quotes - 1 to 2
Pokemon quotes- 1
Everythime I read a chapter(any story) with the Royal wedding I can't help but think if everyone just steeped back and took a better look at that situation a solution could of been found to help both party's. Poor Chrissy. regardless of my personal bias I liked what you did with this chapter. I'm also a fan of the weapon you gave my Queen.
Nice RvB reference. I love that episode.
Man, I'm really loving this story. I really do hope we find out this tale that Conner told Cadance and Twilight. I would think that the way we will find out is that Luna will ask about it. Continue with work, it's really great!
Well good and bad news. The good news is a new chapter is up(yay) and I'm out of my rut.(double yay) I haven't had much reading this past week so this is something I've been needing. Bad news is you chose to post at the time the site is doing updates(you have terrible timing) I'm going to have to copy this to see how many times I have to post before it goes through. So lets get this review on the road.
Luna want all that cream filling for herself.
https://derpicdn.net/img/view/2013/3/20/275317__safe_princess+luna_cute_image+macro_tongue_licking_implied+licking.png
I wished that Halloween was a more important holiday that got schools closed a long time ago.
More mysteries. This time going from before he showed up.(It's not your OC if he didn't suffer from some type of drama.)
I wonder if River is going to appear this season?
Yay more Doctor Who. And I loved the Temple of Doom, It's my favorite Indiana Jones movie(was also my first one.)
Ghostbusters reference.(I ain't afraid of no ghost.) It's all Bill Murray's fault that we didn't get a Ghostbusters 3 before Harold Ramis died.
I know that it's not true, but I feel like your copying me.
The first reference I'm trying to figure out(I'm thinking Halo related) the other is obviously Red vs. Blue.
DBZ Abridged. Although I'm pretty sure he never heard those speeches that many times.
Classic Pokemon reference.
Again, just saying that you better not disappoint when we find out what happened to him and how badly injured he was.
Since when did Twicorn get Applejack lie detecting powers?*end of review*
Well this was an exciting chapter.(which I didn't expect much action in this story) I like how you made the Canterlot Wedding more intense than it was. So does that mean that dream back in Chapter 5 was just a dream since it looks like he was never encased in a pod and then shanked? I'm confused as to why Luna doesn't want to celebrate Nightmare Night? I thought she got over this last year, and it doesn't even make more sense when she's in the town that accepts her and would be honored if she appeared. Anyway I have a feeling there will be more chapters coming up later this month. So I just have to wait and see what happens.
5113366 Dont forget
....Its a Resident Evil 5 quote.
5113458 Thank you sir i shall add that to the score counter.... tune in next chapter for the next 'Referance Counter'
From what I can gather from these quotes, I've made this theory: Connor somehow got wound up into something traumatic where the police thought he did it no matter how many times he said he didn't. He got thrown in the slammer for who knows how long, not having a very good time there according to the first quote. He may have been innocent, according to the princesses, but by the power of law from Earth's shitty government, he's labeled as a released prisoner for whatever crime he was framed of committing. His ex girlfriend Anna might have something to do with this, I don't know.
Also, it seems Luna can tell what kind of emotions ponies (or Connor in this case) are feeling in dreams considering the pang of depression going through her body as he mentioned his ex's name. So to not get too involved with Connor's dreams and still hold her promise, she does the next best thing by sleeping with him to stop having the nightmare for one night. She may not have seen what the nightmare was, but at least she was able to stop it for the night, and Connor didn't even question it.
So much foreshadowing in this chapter. So many questions left unanswered while a couple new ones have sprung up.
Y U NO UPDATE MORE OFTEN?!
ok that was epic cant wait for more
I can't believe I found this quote in here of all places.
11/10 for quote usage
and was there a little Tokyo Ghoul reference when he fought Chrysalis?
i like back story. looking forward to more
red vs blue reference swoosh swoosh stab
dragon ball z abridged reference the speech list
stay classy
5113441 The seven minutes thing is from Resident Evil 5.
5113519 I'm getting bombarded with assignments from school and I'm job hunting.
5113694 Ding! You are correct sir/madam! That ending...there are no words.
"his"
"it"
"like"
Needs a question mark at the end.
"call"
"mind"
This makes no sense.
Same as above.
"chain"
"all"
5113519 if the ex is involved, my money is on fake rape claim.
Maybe he got on a plane, saw his buddy jack, and said 'hi, jack!'
Fucking. GENIUS!
And that is sword lessons in a nutshell.
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I'm laughing my plot off.
Is that a Red vs Blue reference I sense?
5114543 Hell yeah!
I know I've heard the "listing speaches" somewhere before but I can't remember where. Also I would actually want to know the story Connor told Twilight and Cadence. I like the story but still feel like I hardly know anything about Connor more then that he's a human who reference alot of stuff
5114606 Oh don't worry I'll get into his backstory more.
This chapter was good but i am kinda wondering how much drool was on Conner when Luna noticed. cant wait for the next chapter
*this is an automated response* the chapter pleases the hive and its queen, you shall be spared.....for now....
as far as i understnd they have hands, so the description: "What would Connor do? She blinked and backed up while charging her horn and channeled her magic to her hooves. She charged forwards and slammed both of her hooves into the door" is incorrect and rather confusing. please edit it. Other than that, it's interesting :)
Red vs blue reference?
I would point out the errors but I think someone beat me to it.
You are a RVB fan and a DBZAbridged fan? Nice. Same here
this whole scene reminds me of the meet the medic theme from tf2
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It probably goes without saying that I'm something of a RvB nut, what with the name.
I said the same thing when I saw Canterlot wedding for the first time. Everyone uses that, it's just that funny like when this happens:
BOOM! "MY CABAGES!!"
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I think they're like Satyrs - Parts of their body are equine - or in this case, MLP pony (in this case, lower half, ears, fur, wings and/or horns) and parts are human (most of the upper body - hands, arms, faces ect).
I could be wrong though.
Well, damn...
Boy got some major balls on him.
First of all, I love the DBZ abridged reference. And second of all, MOAR.
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...I`m sensing sarcasm.
Well, I guess Chrysalis learned the one lesson EVERY non-human learns when facing humans.
We just don't know how to die.