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I am surprised of this chapter.
The way it goes is...unique...in a good way.
This updated right after I finished chapter 2, what luck!
Really, really good rithym on this one. Not the old human-meets-princess-then-sex thing. The human have a good development (and you hint there is more to come). I understand that, since most of the history is being write from his POV, he deserves more time, but i would like some love to Luna development too, since she is not quite the "standard" Princess Luna.
Anyway, thanks, and keep the good work !
4914615 Luna will become more developed as the story unfolds.
This is crazy, its going to be fun to watch.
4914631 Sweet Celestia I took that comment the wrong way. Either way you have a great story your writing and I for one can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.
Oh damn, I'm enjoying this.
Can't wait for more.
Oh god, they want to help him! This cannot end well!
I hope for some serious conversation about privacy in the next chapter, mind-reading is not okay
I am highly interested in how this will play out in the future.
Their plan can't possibly end well
The way that Luna and Connor get along is adorable.
Can he get Luna to stop the mind reading thing? 'Cause I'm guessing that there is nobody who could deal with that without freaking out.
4915127 Yes that will come up in the next chaper!
4915224 will you be focusing more on the main sixes boyfriends as the main comity? I got a say, that's refreshing. You always use the mane six as main characters or side characters. Having them as the background characters is a nice change of pace.
4915066 laws of the universe, of course it won't work but end up inadvertently helping Luna and Conner get together anyways xD
4915285 Thank you.
XBox360 and COD Black Ops?
Why no XBox One?
Was it a coincidence that there is a halo 3 line in this chapter?
4915371 eh, I'm just calling it as I see it. speaking of as I see it.
this guy, is a bad ass.
4915432 Wasn't aware that system existed.
fezzes
Connor is gonna get some moon-poon.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
Awesome, I can't wait to read what happens next!
Looks like someones on fire. Well time to douse the flames with a review:
Halo reference, it's been awhile(I don't think I've played Halo at all this year.)
Either this is a coincidence at the time or you're watching the Simpsons marathon too.
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I've lost count on how many of your OC's have dogs/wolves as pets. And that's not counting the ones you were thinking about giving one. I think you got a problem(obsession)
What you know, called it.
I'm wondering, since Luna's thoughts are in bold, does that mean that she's yelling in Connors head?(imagine the headache from that.)
Actually, besides Doctor Who, how many shows/movies have clubs where all the members wear fezzes?
Hard to believe how much Connor has helped him in just the nine month's he's been in Equestria. It's also great that the roles are reversed. Usually it's always the mares(usually the Mane 6) are the ones playing matchmaker in these fics, so it's nice to see a change once in awhile.*end of review*
So this is going at a good pace. We can already see some juicy comedy coming up in the future so that's exciting. So let's see if stallions are better matchmakers than mares(or better comedy material than mares.)
4916293 No , she's not yelling in his head. When she is I'll have it in CAPS LOCK!
4915432 that console is overkill or complicated.....depends on how Corrupted views it. I personally prefer PC over console for various reasons.
(but yeah Xbox 360 is best console )
CULTS CULTS EVERYWHERE
damn that ending was a total remake of the CMC...........
JUST THE FIRST. 8 SECONDS
4916825 I hear that!
4916834 XBOX 360 IS BEST CONSOLE!!!!!!!!
Mumble: and there she blows..
4916840 Favorite games?
4916843
mainly the halo series, but Halo: Reach and Halo Wars takes the cake.....".. Nyah its Halo: 4
Mumble: I swear she can play all three all day.
4916850
Army of Two 1 and The 40th Day
Ghost Recon Advanced Warefighter 2 and Future Soldier
Rainbow 6 Vegas 2
Sniper Elite 3
Far Cry 3
COD MW-BO2
Gears of War 1-Judgement
Need for Speed The Run
Luna...DAT HALO LINE IZ BEST LINE
4916860
that is more than My steam library and her games combined..........
call of duty MW3 is best game for both of us
4916890 I didn't really like Ghosts. I couldn't choose my loadout for the campaign like BO2. I miss my sniper rifles
4916895 I fucking hate ghosts..... fucking pointless
4916899 I like squad tactic games like Rainbow 6 and Ghost Recon. Can't wait for Seige
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4916908 never heard of rainbow 6 but ghost recon.
rainbow 6 sounds familiar, but doesn't remind me of anything. I mainly like FPS like counter strike. but I prefer team fortress 2. ( i suck at counter strike but im improving)
4916910
Corrupted/Mumble: wut? wut?
This is what popped into my mind, lol!
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4916978 Rainbow Six follows a multi nation counter terrorist organization comprised of Delta Force, SAS, South Korean Spec Ops, Royal Marines, etc.and their missions to stop drug cartels and stuff
halo 2 reference FTW
OH GOD THIS IS A MATCH MADE IN HEAVEN! The only way this would be better is if Luna loved Journey and Phil Collins.
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Also a Halo 4 reference?
4917769 sounds interesting........ tempting
4919760 it is.
4920353 where can I download this game?