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Wow, that last pun, you just couldn't contain yourself did you?
Whatever, it made me laugh and cringe at the same time!
5177648 What pun?
5177476 The right now percent.
5177661 I quote "Hold your horses!"
5177648 it would have been better if she'd said it and he then picked her up and started leaving
Oh boy, now we're getting to the sexy parts.
Besides that, pretty good chapter, keep up the good work.
5177688 prolly
5177686 How did I not see that!?
You deserve two epic for both the ingenious costume, and the Pyramid Head Thriller prank.
Check the homepage again
Not completely sure cause of the time difference but your featured again as of/ 10/23/14 - 10/24/14.
Great story and congrates on the recent featuring again again *cause its your second featuring
5177694 you didn't!?
No offense though
Now was Mac Dr.Frankinstien or Frankinstiens monster?
A sad moment, that follows up into a sweet moment...Bittersweet.
Sobstory2014
*is light headed from the mammoth nose bleed caused by the sexy images in his head from this chapter*...nice
Very sweet and informative chapter
Pyramid Head!
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wow awesome when are they going to have the sex thing how many chapters?
YAAAAAS I LOVES IT
This chapter was great, especially the guys' reaction to Luna's custome. Interesting backstory you drew for Connor.
What this brings to mind is hard to explain
Floating Alicorn
Floating 's'
Missing 'r'
Yay! A silent hill reference, I knew one fic would have that!
LUNA IS THINKING OF HIM EVEN MORE. SHE WANTS THE D!!!!!11
5177708 Frankenstein's monster.
So we got to know what went on with Connor's jail time. Makes sense for why he resents her and how she somehow gets into his nightmares. Poor guy. Now there's the mystery of Luna's black scar on her chest and how it got there, plus the scars on Connor's body, but that may be from his experiences in fighting the Changelings and going against Tirek, I don't know. Can't wait for the next chapter!
5177844 Alrighty then because when I read that I thought the actual Dr. not the monster people seem to think the monster is called Frankinstien when it's not.
5177883 Yeah I make that mistake sometimes too.
I saw the RVB reference. Nice
Now all we need is Connor popping out of a vent to eat you while your running from a working Joe. Then the spooky will be complete.
Nice blazing saddles reference.
5177868me neither.
Although I don't know why she would think he wouldn't want her because of her scars...he even has some too...
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OH GOD NO NOT THE FREAKY CLOWN FROM THE MOVIE IT ANYTHING BUT THAT!!!!!
You need to use other words so that you dont have to repite the same one over and over.
Like when you repite the mare, or the man. Try using other words, he, she, Connor, the librarian, the human, etc.
Oh please, it’s a statue of me after all and I’ll do whatever I want to it.” The mare snapped her fingers and the statue flipped upside down and was balancing on it’s horn.
love it
stay classy
Gabriel Belmont? Castlevania? I love you, marry me.
5178243 You know girls. They worry more about their appearance than us guys. Some would freak out from just an extra flab of fat, but I usually think that makes her curvier and sexier.
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but he has scars too, so eh...whatever.
5178271 Oh, I'm not arguing with that one. Screw the Skyrim PC port! It's really a good game, but it was definitely designed for the consoles. That mouse control on the menus I also made the mistake of using the Souls series as my example, when Dark Souls has one of the single worst ports of all time.
So I see that you gave our hero somewhat the same background story from Law and Order SVU, eh.
5178619 I LOVE that show! I cried when Elliot left!
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5178855 GONG GONG!
5178378 I agree with ya there m8
You do know that the Summer Sun Celebration is the holiday that calibrates the banishment of Nightmare Moon right?
[See Season 4 Episode-01, Celesta's line about the Summer Sun Celebration. Around 6:00 into the episode, give or take a second or two.]
Nightmare Night is the holiday that reminds everypony that Nightmare Moon tried to bring everlasting night to Equestria. The holiday is probably just a reminder not to do bad things or you'll be sent to the moon. And the candy offering probably represents the act of sharing, even towards people you don't like, but this last bit is just a guess on my part.
Well looks like Luna has the hots for Connor.
Ps. we need all of the horror movie references I hope for a The Shining reference next
So, it looks like you listened to me this year, that's good. Well since I've got time, I think I can put a good review here:
I figured this was going to be the case, but new flash: Luna is in Ponyville! She's in the one place that will accept her everyday of the year,ESPECIALLY Nightmare Night.
Y no u teleport?
I think I brought up the whole chick's look in good in scars too in another story but I can't remember. So it looks like Luna herself has a few mysteries herself.
I've played only one Castlevania game and that was on the Sega Genesis. Is this a good game? I was interested in it when it came out but wanted to wait and see how well it did.
I think I need a refresher on what Shy has done to make that rule.
I know that this was probably just nothing, but my head started thinking Hocus Pocus, Rarity is Sarah while Thunderlane is her zombie boyfriend Billy.
Again, doesn't happen in real life. If it did then that's not a good thing for Connor.
*buzzer* WRONG, It was on the Summer Sun Celebration where Luna was imprisoned. That's Season 1 stuff man!(come on man.)
Does it count as rape if your already in a relationship? Couldn't it be just sex?
I want to know how he found out?
So his Grandfather watches Red vs. Blue.(Now that's a cool grandpa.)
I'm surprised that she didn't just blow it up.*end of review*
I really enjoyed this chapter. We got comedy, our first sex scene, some sad sweet moments, and Connors back story.(I guess that only leaves the Tirek incident left.) I'm not sure how much longer its gonna take before they hook up. Seriously what else is there? Well whatever we'll get to it eventually. Looking forward to the next one.
I applaud his ability to get Luna up from being down in the dumps :D
Awesome Blazing Saddles reference.
When he started dancing I expected this instead.
An excellent story. Even if the typos were distracting. 8/10 cant wait for more! (Plus you had a Spaceballs reference)