4904396 Thank you for the kind words, but everyone is entitled to their own opinion.

It's a fun romp. I like the aspect of Gamer Luna. That's pretty nice, and also having a portal available for Equestria to Earth Travel is decent. That said, I'm surprised that you don't, or haven't mentioned, Button Mash. I'm only saying it because of the massive fan cannon dealing with Button being a gamer. I could see the colt warming up to Connor.

Regardless, this is a fun story that I plan on following to the very end.

Thanks for letting us view the universe you've created.

My god!
I'm not sure whether my eye is leaking from the sheer beauty of this portrayal of Luna, or if it's the liquid burn I got in the corner of it earlier tonight.
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Actually, the stinging with it answers that question.

It's storys like this that make me love reading, especially your's. I wish I could write this well, your damn near perfect. Please, never stop writing.

There she is!

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Agreed my friend, very agreed.

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Meeeeh just wondering. Anyway nice story.

“I need all the bleach.” Connor said as he made his way downstairs.
“Get a second glass if you would be so kind.” The Princess said as she followed the human.

This....This is what earned you my like,fav,and continued interest.

I like it! A like and fav you shall have.

Luna best Princess enough said

She's psychic. Of course, she's psychic. It wouldn't be any fun if she wasn't!

Love It! It perfectly describes me in that situation. Good job on making the characters not too dull and predictable.

This reminds me a little of Her Starry Sky, by J8ck78.

(1) MC walks in on Twilight doing naughty things AFTER she's asked them to come over.*

(2) Luna can read MC's mind and respond (probably going to lead to some awkward moments due to MC's thoughts).

(3) Luna had an alter ego so as to remain incognito (although, many stories do have that).

Thaaaaat being said, I'm not saying it's a ripe-off. It's already got a like from me, and I am tracking it. You have elements in it that make it your own, and I love the back story, as well as the shipping done with the Mane 6. I look forward to more of your story (and secretly hope that you take it someplace fresh. We need more original stuff on this site).

*I mean serious, I'm not bashing the story, cause it's actually pretty good and I'm going to be keeping an eye on it, but Twilight basically tells MC that "[she] need [him] over here. It’s important", then goes and bumps ugly with her coltfriend. Ooooops.

4905630 In all fairness though she did say "at noon" and he came over earlier which obviously means Comet was supposed to be long gone.

I have a question; what does anthro mean?

All hail the newspaper! It’s powers can tame even the most wildest of creatures.

ALL HAIL

well, good fic, nice flow... I LIKE IT, may i have another?

I absolutely love the scene where Connor and Celestia caught Twilight screwing with her boyfriend. This Luna has my respect for giving Blueblood the beating of the century.

4905947 Anthropomorphic: To have human like form attributes or Basically the Cover image. Your Welcome

Finally a princess Luna Story.....and.....and.....

I like it
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NLR LUNA NOS CUSTUDITS

Oblivion reference
Skyrim reference

CALLED IT

That link text wall.... That aside, I like where this is going.

4906250 What the fuck is up with the wall of text?

4906383 What refrences?

4906479 "Stop right there criminal scum!”
(Oblivion)

"Azure Star" (daedra artifact quest in skyrim)

Yeah, I'm a bit of a fanboy when it comes to the elder scrolls

4906629 I did not know that they were in Video games the criminal scum thing I've heard used in youtube video mash ups but I ws unaware of it's origins. and the Azure Star thing I chose becuase Luna's disguise is blue and stars are part of the night sky.

Skyrim is boss!

4906629 its also from skyrim

Another chapter so soon(haven't even responded to the first one.) and early in the morning. I had to go through the whole day knowing there was a chapter I have to read and wouldn't until at night. Let's see if I got another one in me. Review start:

“Asking me out Twi? Cause Comet is my friend and-” A purple blast of magic went through his window and hit the wall behind him leaving a scorch mark. “You’re paying for that window Sparkle.” He grumbled.

Hilarious moment already. In your opinion, whose your funniest OC? It's messed up seeing that you can send magic blast through phones(what if someone used this method, turning phones into a weapon?)

Lyra turned to see the human and froze. “Put the screw driver down before you blow us all the way back to Earth.”

Don't know why, but my head went straight to Doctor Who and I'm pretty sure that quote wasn't in the show(for all I know.)

“I can fix it! I-” Bon-bon grabbed the newspaper she had been reading before fetching the human, rolled it up and lightly tapped her mare-friend on the nose.

“No.”

“But I-” Another tap was delivered.

Bad Lyra, bad.
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“However, we were meeting with some representatives from the griffin and dragon kingdom. Along with some ambassadors from earth. Luna’s little outburst caused some concern. Therefore I suggested that she,” she looked over to Connor. “how you human’s say, ‘lay low.’”

Wouldn't that mean that whatever business they had planned, Luna wont be involved or have any say? Man what a way for Celestia to make Luna less important. How long will she have to stay low?

“Do it because you owe me.” Celestia said with a grin.

“Huh?”

“The crown is covering your medical bills, consider this as a collateral.” Connor’s right eye twitched.

More like blackmail. Also it was because of the princess actions that cause this to happen so if anything it's their fault and are responsible for covering any damage Tirek did.

“The tax bit anyway. The medical is a gift for your role in Tirek’s imprisonment.” The man furrowed his eyebrows and crossed his arms.

“I didn’t do a bloody thing. Just got my ass kicked.” He gripped his right arm in frustration.

So I was right, Connor did do something during Tirek's attack. I'm guessing it wasn't much seeing as nothing came out of it but a few broken bones. First Celestia is saying the bills she's paying are collateral and now she says they're a gift? I'm confused here, she said one thing and in ten seconds she contradicted herself. If the bills a gift then why bringing it up as means of blackmail?

“Very true, but Pinkie practically blurts big news to the entire town like it’s her job and Rarity loves to gossip.” Twilight stated.

And of course since Luna is going to be living in Ponyville in disguise, Pinkie's going to throw her a party.(That's not going to end well.)*end of review*

Well we finally get to the main story, I'm guessing the first chapter might as well have been a prologue since were now starting the whole roommate scenario. Let's see how the first day will go.

ALL OF THE BLEACH

Do anyone of you have anything stronger then bleach? If not I require several tubs full of it.

4907395 Oh he got a WHOLE lot more than a few broken bones. I'll explain the full extent of his injuries later on. I really don't know who my funniest OC is, but Connor is off to a good start.

Lol Blueblood got his butt kicked.

4907774
Ya, from the looks of it, he got fucked up. I'm mostly imagining him attack Tirek,(not very effective) and all he did was backhand Connor that sent flying and crashing into someones house. Also is Connor going to be having some Vietnam flashbacks? I'm pretty sure Luna would be perfect in taking care of that problem.

Good good but needs more updates

4906119 omg dat picture XD

4908160
Every time someone tries to give him a high-five, BLAM! Cue flashback to Koreatnam.

4907323 The guards in Skyrim say that too? I've never noticed that before.
4906928 when I read the "criminal scum" line I thought "cool, he may plays Oblivion...or Skyrim." And when I read Luna's other name "azura's star" it had to be to big of a coincidence for you to not play Elder Scrolls.

4906629 Is actually Azura's Star, though I think it's close enough to count anyway

4908757 Oh, my bad.

I only have one complaint: donning means to put something on, doffing means to take something off.

I assume that everywhere you say 'donning' you mean wearing or sporting.

Beef over with.

I am digging this story, very interesting and inventive so far. Made me actually laugh out loud, too.

Heh. The cover art has ZERO shame. Notice how her boobs are highlighted differently from the rest.
Cover art, I am disappoint.
No really, though. It seems pretty good actually.

4908670 yup heres a vid it's about 14 seconds in
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4909577 Ha! Sounds just like the one in Oblivion. How they say it was always funny to me.

Is it wierd that i could see Twi being into that kinda fucked up shit?

4910067 nope, horny librarian? totally possible she's a dominatrx.

Cannot wait to see more of this.

So, Luna is mind reading? Isn't that a bit "snooty", thinking that she can simply read other's minds?
I would be EXTREMELY pissed off by getting my mind read...

4906119 Oh, Onyx. But you like ALL the Luna stories!

orning Bob-bon.

Bon-bon

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