Life has been hard for Trixie ever since her second visit to ponyville. And now, her latest attempt to repair her image up in Canterlot has turned out to be nothing more than an evil plot concocted by a group of Changelings.
However, from this upsetting turn of events, raises an opportunity. And opportunity in the form of a mysterious stallion who offers Trixie a job to work for a small team of ponies that work with the Royal Guard. A group with some extraordinary abilities, and who (mostly) seem all too happy to let her onto the team.
But even when she accepts the offer, the question remains; why her?
An idea I've had stashed away for a while, with a bunch of OC's made by me a good friend of mine. Other tag is there because there will be several show characters later on. Think of this as a sort of supernatural crime drama, but with an overarching story.
This is a wall of text and the plot is buried under a layer of seemingly unnecessary actions. It's not the worst, but it certainly needs work. It probably has some better-hidden flaws I didn't notice, but I'm not going to dissect this whole thing right now.
Too blocky for my tastes. Split the paragraphs up! One idea per paragraph. Hard as hell to read.
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Thank you; I'm already trying to rework the paragraphs and get rid of the filler dialogue. Will hopefully have it revised by tomorrow and a bit better at least.