The Three Lost Princesses

by Mr Alicorn

The Beginning (Tia Blue)

Author's Note:

Hey in this story there are three main characters Tia,Trix, and Mixer on the front of the story it shows a picture of three fillies Tia is the Blue one,Trix is the Orange one and Mixer is the purple one just wanted to let everyone know that.

"Here I am in the outskirts of Equestia watching my village burn to ashes" I thought to myself as I cried.

"Trix, Mixer, and I are just sitting here being the only survivors" I said.

"So what are we going to do Tia?" Mixer asked still crying a little.

"I think we should head for Equestia" I answered.

"What but that place is a myth you know what my mother said to us Equestia is make believe" Trix said.

"But its not a myth so we better get walking" I said starting to walk .

"Alright I'm coming to" Mixer said following me.

"Sure why not" Trix said.

"So how much do you know of this Equestia place anywho?" Trix asked in wonder.

"Well my grandfather and grandmother told me stories of the place how it is a place where all kind of creatures live together like Dragons, Griffins, Etc" I answered.

"Wait a sec Dragons?!?!?!?" Trix said.

"Yep Dragons" I said.

"Wait what about Changelings?" Mixer asked.

"Nope not them anything but Changelinga all of them are just evil ALL OF THEM!" I answered.

D"uh Mixer why would they have them in there land if its really real" Trix said.

"And they just beat our village to ashes no pony could have won against them" I said.

"Yeah and they are so heartless taking our mothers and fathers like that but I'm glad we all escaped before they got us and took us with them" Trix said.

"But I wish they could have came in other season not winter" Mixer said.

"Yeah they just had to come when it was winte-" I covered Trix mouth.

"LOOK!" Mixer said looking like she just saw a ghost.

All of us went and hid behind and big rock.

"CHANGELINGS!" All of us said quietly.

"I know I heard somepony talking around here general" A Changeling said getting closer and closer to us.

"You are just hearing things again anyway the queen will kill any of us if we are late and I will kill any of you if they keep me from my new life and you are stopping me so you must die" The General said.

"No please sir I'll never do it ever again I'M SORRY I'M SORRY!" The Changeling said.

And the Changeling was killed by The General and Then him and his guards left down one of the canyons.

"Wow he is done" I said looking at he Changeling.

"I call the sword" Mixer said getting the sword and belt off of his hip and putting it on hers.

"No fair I was about to call it" Trix said.

"At least we will have a weapon to use now" I said.

"Lets keep on going" I said.

"Wait look at this Tia,Mixer" Trix said getting something out from under the Changeling's helmet.

"What is it?" Mixer asked.

"Its a map" I answered after.

"And it shows Equestia" I said smiling.

"No way" Trix said grabbing the map from me.

"Really" Mixer said.

"There is the Kingdom of the Changelings and There is Equestia and we are here I said as I grabbed the map back and pointed to different places.

"Yeah but we are far away from Equestia it looks like this might take a few days or weeks for us to get to Equestia and only days for us to The Kingdom of Change but were not going there so we better keeping on going if we want to get there soon" Mixer said starting to run when she finished her sentence.

"Yeah so we better get going come on Tia" Trix said running after Mixer.

"Alright" I said after picking up the helmet and putting it on.

"So how are we going to survive without any food?" Trix asked.

"I don't think we will for long if we don't find any" I answered.

"And you do know we are going the way that takes longer to get to Equestia" I said.

"I know on the map there is a village near us It might take all night to get there but at least we will get some food for us to have for awhile" Mixer said pointing on the map.

"Alright lets go keep on going then" I said.

"Oh and Mixer you in charge of the map" I said giving her the map.

"Thanks" Mixer said.

"You can have the sword Trix" Mixer said throwing the sword to Trix.

"Thanks" Trix said as she caught the sword.

"Lets move everypony" I said as we left down the other canyon.

- After 5 hours of non stop running we were there at the village -

"We are here!" I said falling down on my belly.

"Finally" Trix said falling to the ground.

"Alright lets get some food,drink and clothes" Mixer said.

"Wait how are we going to carry all of that?" I asked.

"Saddle Bags Duh Mixer" answered.

"Oh yeah" I said.

"Wait where's Trix" Mixer asked.

"I don't know" I said.

"There she is come on lets go get her she is already in the village" Mixer said running where she saw her.

"Coming" I said.

"So who is going to get what" Mixer asked.

"Why are you asking me?" I asked confessed by Mixer's question.

"Because I need you to get the clothes Trix to get the drink and I'm getting the food" Mixer answered.

"There she is" I said seeing her come out of a store and using her magic to carry something.

"HEY! Why did you just run off like that?" Mixer asked.

"Oh sorry about I was just thinking why don't we stay here for the night?" Trix asked.

"Because what if Changelings show up and tear this place apart when we are sleeping and if were not sleeping I don't think we will have any chance of escaping" I answered.

"Well that's good enough for me anyway what am I getting?" Trix asked.

"Your getting the drink" Mixer said.

"How much do I get?" Trix asked.

"What ever you can fit in your Saddle Bag" Mixer said.

"So what were you doing in that store?" I asked.

"Oh just getting our Saddle Bags here I got two for all of us" Trix answered.

"Great let's get our stuff" I said.

"We will meet back here when we are done" Mixer said.

"Agreed" Mixer said.

"Agreed" Myself and Trix said.

And then I left to a supplies store named: Adventure Things.

"Hello is there anypony in here?" I asked walking in to the store.

"Yeah somepony is" a pony named Joe Joe said.

"Oh well I'm Tia I'm looking for some adventure clothes" I said.

"Well you came to the right place then" Joe said.

When Joe saw me he thought I was just joking around with him.

"Very funny filly but I'm only helping paying customers" Joe said.

"I will pay just show me any stuff you have for fillies" I said.

"Fine but I don't have much for fillies" Joe said.

He showed me some clothes,tents,and some other gear we would need.

"I'll take them" I said.

He looked at me like I was crazy.

"Come on there's a place I need to be right now" I said.

"Whatever" Joe said.

"This all will be 122 bits" Joe said.

"Here you go" I said after I finish putting everything in my bags.

"Bye Thanks for your help" I said as I run out the store.

- About a half in hour later Trix and Mixer Finally came back from getting the stuff. -

"Alright you both are here lets get going" I said.

"Alright!" Mixer and Trix Both said.

"At least we are done and now back to our quest" Mixer said.

"Yeah and I got us a tent to sleep in" I said.

"That's nice" Mixer said.

"Come on lets keep going the longer way to Equestia" Trix said.

Why don't we just go the easier way?" Mixer asked.

"That's why" Trix said pointing her hoof to something.

"Changelings are coming to attack the village we were just in we have to warn them" Mixer said as she about to run back to the village.

"No we can't" I said.

"What why?!?!" Mixer asked.

"Because if we get near the place they will kill us before we have a chance to tell them they are coming" Trix answered.

"So we are just going to let them die!" Mixer said.

"We have no other choice" Trix said.

"Alright" Mixer said.

"Yeah hopefully we get out of here in time come on this way" I said.

And then we trailed off to another path only to be met by somepony.

Comments

[Rainedash]

I'm not trying to be mean but this should be stated bluntly, this story in its current form is really bad. There's no description of where they are, nothing to set the mood, nothing to actually show why the these events are happening. Maybe you should join some of the groups designed to help authors get better, or read up on how to do proper narration for a story.

[Mr Alicorn]

5299225 Thanks but no thanks if you read it you would know why and where they are

[MrTroll]

Looking forward for the next chapter

[Mr Alicorn]

5299331 Thanks

[Elric of Melnipony]

my too best friends

"Too" isn't the same word as "two".

For a long time myself and my too best friends Trix Flame and Mixer were lost having no cutie mark were the worst.

Is this supposed to be one sentence or two? I can't really tell what you're trying to say with that last part.

it's true that I'm just a filly

A new sentence should always begin with a capital letter.

ever seen

The word you want is "since", not "seen".

we have came to Equestia

Choose either "we came" or "we have come".

are lives

"Are" isn't the same word as "our".

it's true that I'm just a filly but It feels like I'm a full grown mare but ever seen we have came to Equestia are lives have been changed but there is a lot to my story so I'll begin at the beginning.

Do you know what a run-on sentence is? If not, this is a perfect example of one.

Even if it pains us we will tell the story.

This sentence is missing a comma.

English isn't your native language, is it?

[Luz]

pls no

[The Guardian and Friends]

Alicorn ocs? Yeah no.