So the best flyer to come out of Cloudsdale isn't afraid of anything, right?
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Dude, you didn't need to create three separate chapters for a fic that's barely a thousand words long.
*were
Always spell out numbers unless it's a number higher than one hundred.
You need to start a new paragraph whenever another character speaks.
One exclamation mark will suffice. This is a fanfic, not a teenage girl's Tumblr.
*was
...Huh?
Uuuuugh, perspective shift.
Pretty sloppily written, honestly, but it's nothing a good editor can't sort out.
7165162 thank you got point out a few things, I wrote the first two chapters a long time ago so I figured there would be some mistakes