Chapter #3 Happy Endings (End)
A few days pass and Techie arrives at the train station hoping to see his mate waiting for him with a loving greeting but was surprised to see Twilight waiting for him. He still remembered when Twilight tried to stop Ninroot's business from growing but he wasn't one to hold grudges.
"Techie! I have to tell you something! It's about Ninroot!" She said while running towards him.
"What!? What happened?" He asked with concern.
"Well- uh *sigh* I can't tell you it's best if you see for your self." She said with a frown. "Just so you know, I did the best I could." Hearing that Techie was panicking about what trouble Ninroot could be in, or if she was in a much more worse situation. He dashed back to the cabin even teleporting half way there. When he arrived at the cabin he opened the door to see a dark and cluttered home, he knew Ninroot never liked the house like that. As he looked around he saw something that startled him, he saw a pony sized light brown thing hanging from the ceiling. He went towards it and poked at it with his hoof. Suddenly it started to slowly open. He saw the wings separate from the mass, he then saw something that shocked him. He saw the head of his mate poke out from the mass and look at him with those violet bat like eyes.
"What the hell!" Techie said still staring at his girlfriend's head staring at him.
"Go ahead and say it Techie, say I'm scaring you and run away!" Said Ninroot with a menacing voice.
"Ninroot? I-is that y-you?" He asked, Ninroot got out of the position she was in to get a right side up look at her mate.
"Yes it's me Techie, your "Lover" the one you used to love with a passion." Said Ninroot in the same voice.
"What do you mean Nin? I still love you don't think I don't." He said with a caring expression trying to get close to Ninroot.
"What! A-aren't you scared?" She asked surprised.
"No, of course not Nin I love you I would never be scared of you, no matter what you look like. Besides I think you look even better."
Ninroot started to blush and said "I-I do? How, how could a beast like me look beautiful?" She said turning away from Techie.
"Well first your eyes are more enchanting, and I don't care about looks I love what makes you, you Nin nothing could ever change that." He said in a soft voice.
"R-really? You think my eyes are enchanting?" She asked looking at him.
"They were the first things I noticed about you when I first saw you." He drew closer to her as she did as well. They both start to kiss, Ninroots wings flapping pleasantly and gently caught Techie's eyes. "Wow! You have wings? That's, that's awesome!" He exclaimed as he examined her wings.
Ninroot again started to blush "They are something are they?" She said with a grin
"Damn straight!" Techie yelled getting Ninroot's attention.
"Quite a colorful language you have Techie," She said.
"Well when you're in Manehatten for a while you tend to pick up some traits." He answered jokingly. After that Ninroot became more comfortable about how she looked even though she was a bat pony, in fact she was ready to face the crowd even in her bat form. Of course she wanted Techie to go with her for support, but what they didn't know is that bat ponies are frowned upon in the pony community. When they got to the town everypony did nothing but stare at the two, scattered whispering could be heard and suddenly Techie and Ninroot heard a voice call out
"Ugh a bat pony! What a freak! and another voice pitched in
"Freaky ugly beast!" Ninroot hid behind Techie as he stopped staring at the crowd. He then started to talk.
"So what if shes a bat pony! So what if shes different! Some of you ponies make me sick! Acting all high and mighty! Acting like you're better than others! Well I don't care what you say or do! This bat pony is not just any bat pony shes my bat pony! And you ponies have no right to judge her in anyway! This bat pony used to be and still is Ninroot the kind, loving and caring filly I call my girlfriend, you all may now her from her shop, I know her for being my girlfriend! So if you have anything to say you can take it up with me because I'm all ears! Yeah shes different but you're no better to call it out like some circus act! Shes still a living pony she still has feelings!" And with that they turned away to head back towards the cabin. Leaving the crowd behind them.
The next day Ninroot went out on one of her walks but this time she didn't go to the everfree she went to town confident that Teky's speech made some sort of change. When she arrived in the town to her surprise no pony stared in fact ponies were actually greeting her like they would when she was a normal pony. And for a while she felt like a normal pony. Since she was comfortable with showing herself in public she re opened her shop. She was even taking lessons from Rainbow Dash on how to fly and learn to use her new wings. Her and Teky grew closer together and their love increased majorly, it grew to the point where Techie Hoof proposed to Ninroot which accepted and soon got married. They still live together happy as can be.
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A pretty decent read. Good job.
4681762 Thanks hopefully this story blows my last one out of the water makes up for the failure the last one left
No Ones ever a failure. Keep believing bro. I'm not exactly confident in my story, but hey, maybe something will happen.
4681775 Thanks man I'm not loosing faith it's just the last story I wrote was so bad even I think that and I wrote it. But everybody has at least one fail in their rise to fame
Oh. Well this one certainly has potential.
Some spelling mistakes here and there but other than that it was a good read. Wouldn't mind a sequel to this story.
4681810 Thats all I wanted to here so what is one thing you would want in the sequel?
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Well I would like it to go into more detail about why batponies are hated and maybe she will try to fix their reputation. That's what I think would be a good idea for a sequel.
4682780 Not a bad idea hmm, I'll see what I can do.