• Published 11th Apr 2012
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Treasure Planet - SirPenninghoof



A word in outer space, lies a vast amount of treasure...

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SuperNova (Short)

Rainbow dash awoke from her slumber; she sat up on her bed and lazily looked around, her head throbbed, she felt queasy and uneven. She stretched her aching back and got out of bed heading for the door, she crept down the hallway and walked up the docks to see a wide awake crew, and twilight steering the ship.

Twilights hooves were on the ship, she was shouting commands at Mr. Arrow, and Arrow was repeating the exact, clear, commands back to the crew. Who were right now releasing the solar sails from their roping to catch some solar drifts, and travel faster?

“Morning Rainbowdash!” said twilight, she still had her back turned and was messing with knobs under the steer,

“Approaching Malappus SUN!” shouted Mr. Arrow; he waved hand commands to the crew,

Twilight gazed at the sky, she hadn't noticed the loud noise; When she did she turned her head to the sun.

“Wait a second…” Twilight replied, she took out a telescope from her bag, she steadied it and continued to examine the sun for a few minutes, then she looked up, sweat beaded her face, her face turned read, and she gasped,

“The Malappus, It’s gone…. Supernova!” she said, she ran to the steer and tried to steer is back around, but the ship was already being pulled into the suns black hole at a quick rate,

Fluttershy approached from the docks at top speed and almost trampled twilight, she saw the sun and took out a calculator; She was frantically typing numbers and hitting enter, she then moved over to a small computer and starting making calculations, looking up at the supernova from time to time,

“The supernova will release one last Nova flux, in exactly twenty three point two seconds, if we can ride that wave out of here…” Fluttershy continued to say,

“Yes Fluttershy!” Twilight said excitedly, “We can ride that nova flux out of the black holes grip and ride on to treasure planet!” she turned to Mr. Arrow, his face with confusion,

“Mr. ARROW! RELEASE ALL SOLAR SAILS!” she shouted with deadly command,

“Aye Cap’n… YOU HEARD HER CREW! RELEASE ALL SOLAR SAILS!” he shouted,

“But we just finished...” one started to say “TIEING THEM DOWN!” another one finished him, they climbed up the ropes at a quick pace, untying the ropes and releasing solar lines to help catch the energy. The rest of the crew toppled out from under deck as a large blast past through them,

“SECURE ALL LIFE LINES!” Yelled twilight sparkle, Rainbow dash ran to tighten them all, making sure each was the correct knotting and the correct tightness, maximum tightness, she ran back to twilight who was arguing with Fluttershy,

“LIFE LINES SECURED CAP’N!” rainbow yelled over the loud, raging, black hole. They descended into the black hole slowly, Fluttershy, twilight, and Rainbowdash grabbed each other, they held on for dear life…

Suddenly a large blast was heard and the nova flux erupted through the black hole, the ship launched out of it like a cannon in back into space; Away from the grip of the dreaded black hole.

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Mr. Arrow was flung across the ship at high speeds, he flew off the ship and was only holding on by the rope. He held for dear life, sweat beads forming on his rock forehead; The red crab creatures had approached the rope attached to Mr. Arrow.

"Pull me up!" said Mr. Arrow, he looked confused at the crab,

The crab shook his head no, he pinched his claws and cut the rope with them.

"Noooooooooooo!" screamed Mr. Arrow as he plunged into the darkness, and into the black holes void.

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They all shouted excitedly, happy to be alive! One of the crewmates brought out ales of alcohol, and they drunk liek they had nothing to worry in the world about! Until the crab approached them with sorrow,

“Captain… Mr. Arrows lifeline was not secured…” he said in sorrow, he gave a small smile to the crew, who smiled back in evil,

“I was sure!” Rainbowdash said, she rushed to Mr. Arrow’s lifeline, no rope was there, not one bit at all… “I was sure that I secured…” she trailed off, tears in her eyes, she killed another person. It was devastating she knew something had gone wrong, she had tightened every rope, and every rope was there!

She ran into her cabin and put her hooves between her hands, she let out large rivers of tears. Poor Mr. Arrow she thought, she slammed her fist into her pillow, I KILLED HIM, I KILLED HIM! NO! I DIDN’T KILL HIM! YES YOU DID, NOOO! NO!!!!! NOOO!!!!!

She passed out, she was already not feeling well when she awoke this morning.

Comments ( 10 )

Sorry about the Supernova chapter being somewhat short. :heart:

Y so short!? -sob-

I added some onto it.

This story inspired me to write my own Treasure Planet Crossover.

Thanks for the idea.

There is a treasure planet group. I would suggest having this story added to it.

Treasure Planet is part of Disney. You forgot to add this story in it.

Before I read this I must ask one thing: is Rainbow Dash the cyborg guy? Cause works very well if Scootaloo is Jim. Also I hope Tirek is Scrope.

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I will said in the name of him.

Tirek is not Scroop, Scroop himself is already appeared and we don't even know that he's going to appear or not.

And no, Rainbow Dash is in role of Jim of course. John Silver also make the appearance by himself as cyborg pony.

5416184 aww. Figured with Scootaloo as a character tag.

Gotten to the point quicker at least.

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