Treasure Planet

by SirPenninghoof

RLS Legacy

Applejack awoke and put on her robe; she left her room and went upstairs. She entered the room of the other ponies and turned the lights on.

“Wake up!” she screamed, spike jumped up,

“WH... what! I’m up!” he said scared stiff.

“Turn the light off…” slurred twilight,
The rest of ponies said the same thing, turn the light off, but in much harsher words. Applejack walked over and pulled the
covered off each one of them, one by one.

“Get up! We got a big day ahead!” she screamed again,

“Ok! Ok! I’ll get up...” twilight said, sitting up and rubbing her eyes,

“What time is it?” said fluttershy stirring from sleep.

“It’s… 7:30 in the morning” said applejack, she seemed wide awake for someone who had just gotten up herself, she handed the girls their clothes, freshly washed, dried, and ironed. Twilight, fluttershy, rainbow dash, and pinkie pie left the room to change.

They returned in their clothing, neat dresses with exotic designs, fluttershy had a dress with flowers flashing between red and green, rainbow dash didn’t want to wear any fancy clothing, so she wore her button up cloth shirt and leather pants.
Applejack led the girls downstairs, and into the kitchen; the kitchen was full of plates. Roasted boar, pitchers of milk, another melon full of fruit, wooden boxes of cereal, tea pitchers, and cooked eggs stacked on a plate, all ready to be eaten
down.

Rainbow dash and pinkie pie had contests seeing who could eat the most bananas, twilight had a piece of the roasted boar in her mouth, spike was munching down on cinnamon cereal, and pinkie pie and applejack were eating apples, of course applejack would be, lyra was sitting there…

“Are you going to eat?” said applejack, her mouth stuffed with apple,

“No thanks… I’m not hungry…” she replied, she tried eating some boar but she was just not hungry at all it seemed, she got up and left the room,

“She’s moody” said rainbow dash,

“Yeah well she doesn’t want to go on this trip, but it’ll be fun, and she knows it.” Said applejack,

“She’ll be happier once we’ve gotten to montressor.” Said spike,
They finished eating and left the room, applejack led them outside. The butler was standing out there, a small ship was held to the ground by a rope, he stood inside it working on some inner gearings and such, to make sure everything worked fine and well.

Applejack motioned the butler to get down, he did so and they climbed aboard, the butler helping them up made it easier for them. They all took a seat on the benches and applejack sat in the control pit, she pressed a few buttons and turned a knob, she grabbed the handle and pulled back as they went in air.

Off in space, it was beautiful they thought; applejack being the only one to ever go into space, she didn’t think it was ‘as’ beautiful, but still was to her. Dots of the stars sparkled, passing through waves of light blue substances and getting it in lyras hair.

“Oh no! My hair!” she yelled, trying to wipe the blue stuff from it,
Rainbow dash and pinkie pie were laughing,

“It isn’t funny!” she demanded, but they still laughed and she ignored them,

Soon they reached the outer area of montressor and passed through its atmosphere, feeling relief of better oxygen then the space provided, they took in deep breathes and large exhales. The sight to them was amazing, from the distance it seemed solid white with some dark shades and shadows, along with the boats; but when they got closer, they saw the bustling streets and roads, ponies and other creatures ran, walked, and paced around. Some worked, some relaxed in chairs, some asleep, some playing songs for money, and others doing nothing as well.

They landed in the dock, a colt was waiting for them there, and he attached the robe to a metal pole and set up a plank on the ship,

“One after another.” He said patiently, patting twilight gently on the butt as she walked by, twilights face turned red as they met eye to eye, applejack motioned them on and she had one last look with the handsome colt before he was out of site.

They found a rather large colt banging a metal pole straight through the stone with a large jackhammer, his muscles bulging as he banged down on the pole,

“Excuse me, Jacque?” said applejack, approaching him,

“Huh? Oh applejack, nice to see you again!” he said, giving her a hug,

“We need to purchase a ship old friend, know any good ships?” she replied,

“Hmm… Well, there is the RLS legacy that is for sale…” he said,

“Comes with a crew, and a guy named Mr. Arrow?” he said,

“Not exactly the cheapest-“

“You know me, I have the money” applejack said,

“The ship is that away, oh and tells your father next time you see him that I said hi”

“Will do.” She said,

They left; applejack and Jacque hugged and caught up before they left. They found the ship; it was beautiful, nice dark wood, beautiful designs, and large solar Sails. They walked up the ships bridge and saw a woman standing there in an officer’s uniform, she was a cat like creature, whiskers on her face, and she was purring, her face turned to a smile.

“Ah, Hello.” She said greeting them aboard, beside her approached a large man made of stone, his face blank besides his dark stone eyebrows,

“Hello Amelia, Mr. Arrow” said applejack, bowing,

“We would like to purchase your ship from your hands.” Applejack stated,

“Well Mrs. The ships cost is one hundred thousand dollars” said Amelia,

“Ok then, it will be settled.” Applejack said taking out a flat device with a pen attached,

“Sign here” applejack said to Amelia,

Amelia signed the flat device above a line, it stated ‘Purchase of RLS legacy for the amounted price of 100,000 $ ‘applejack and Amelia shook hands, she took the device and she left the ship. She turned around before and faced Mr. Arrow.

“Mr. Arrow!” she yelled,

“Yes Cap’n?”

“Stay on board with these ponies and make sure they keep the ship in shape!”

“Yes Cap’n, shall I still be paid for my services?”

“I will handle the money” said applejack standing forward, Mr. Arrow nodded.

“ALL CREW TO DECK BESIDES CHEF!” Mr. Arrow shouted at the top of his lungs.

Gangly creatures appeared from the underbelly of the ship, some looked like giant crabs, some had a head and a face on their stomach, stone had gills, and some were reptilian. Mr. Arrow turned back to them,

“Tomorrow we shall get you well acquainted with the crew” Mr. Arrow looked up and it was turning nighttime,

Arrow showed them to their cabins under deck, rainbow and pinkie shared a room, spike and fluttershy, lyra and twilight, and applejack got a room to herself. They settled in and went to sleep, another big day tomorrow, meeting the crew of the ship.

Comments

[Thespurgin]

Still short... maybe it needs more description and artistic license? Samaru was right about those errors as well, but aside from that the text wasn't bad.

[SirPenninghoof]

I have a very short patience, therefore limiting me sitting and typing.