The Planetary Map; A bronze ball of inscriptions, when activated, the device shows a gargantuan map of the entire galaxy, every nebula, sun, planet, blackhole, you name it, its all there. Stories of the so called 'Treasure Planet' have been told by cults for generations.
But now, they have a map of the whole universe. Is the map a fake? Is a real planet, where if they find it, they will be rich beyond their wildest dreams? Who knows, you might just keep reading and find out.
[All Main-Cast will be the crew, captain, chef, etc.., it will workng differently than the movie.]
Chapters (4)
This is interesting. I like the scene you're setting here, but there are a good number of spelling and grammatical errors. I'd suggest getting someone to pre-read this and/or edit it for you. Other than that, I like it and I'm excited to see where you take this.
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I shall look it over.
My eagerness grows. It is interesting that you portrayed Lyra as Mrs. Hawkins... I'm not sure I understand fully how you recast the mane 6. First of all... I haven't seen the classical, rowdy jerk of Jim Hawkins and his solar suffer.
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I understand what you mean, I think if anyone would portray him in this. It woud be rainbow dash, in the story she will turn out to be full of questions, ready to fight and explore, and get into trouble; just as jim hawkins.
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I can see that... so the others are additions to the original cast I presume?
I also noticed that you had spike mention sidetrips... any luck we'll see some of those? I mean it might be a bit awkward, but it would be funny too.
On another note, I can't imagine who will be playing Silver, Captain Amelia, and Mr. Arrow. Not a CLUE...
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The side trips will be there own chapters.
Scootalo will be B.E.N
Silver, amelia, and Mr. Arrow are surprises.
467329 Oh the hoof drops. Now to figure out who the other CMC are.
I can't wait until you get to teh side-trips though... I played the old "Treasure Planet Battle at Procyon" game, so I know a bit about that universe... it's awesome to roam in. Asteroid belts and those whales and the etherium currents... ahhhh....
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Honestly I've never played the games. So some of it I'll imaginatively invent, and some ill look up.
467579 I can help if you like. I remember the games very well, and if nothing else I'd love to help with a fanfic... might as well do something other than read if I can't get the guts up to write my own story.
Still short... maybe it needs more description and artistic license? Samaru was right about those errors as well, but aside from that the text wasn't bad.
I have a very short patience, therefore limiting me sitting and typing.
Interesting set up, though I would have thought Twilight would be explaining about Treasure Planet, not Spike.
Sorry about the Supernova chapter being somewhat short.
Y so short!? -sob-
I added some onto it.
This story inspired me to write my own Treasure Planet Crossover.
Thanks for the idea.
There is a treasure planet group. I would suggest having this story added to it.
Treasure Planet is part of Disney. You forgot to add this story in it.
Before I read this I must ask one thing: is Rainbow Dash the cyborg guy? Cause works very well if Scootaloo is Jim. Also I hope Tirek is Scrope.
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I will said in the name of him.
Tirek is not Scroop, Scroop himself is already appeared and we don't even know that he's going to appear or not.
And no, Rainbow Dash is in role of Jim of course. John Silver also make the appearance by himself as cyborg pony.
5416184 aww. Figured with Scootaloo as a character tag.
Gotten to the point quicker at least.