Twilight Sparkle is your average multi-billionaire inventor except for one small difference. She's Iron Mare, the armored super hero. She's been facing super villains for what seems like forever, but things quickly change. More seem to appear, each stronger than the last. As strong and smart as she is, she can't do it alone. But one day she realizes that she isn't and that if the magic of friendship can't be saved, it can be Avenged.
AVENGERS ASSEMBLE!
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A crossover with our favorite MLP Characters in the Marvel Universe setting.
Note* This is a project I've been working on so Criticism is welcome, it's how I learn.
Editor: Bennet001
Chapters (8)
Hm...
Strange. How to explain.
This feels more like an Avengers with MLP elements crossover than MLP crossover with the Avengers, if that makes sense.
Because of that, a lot of this story is kinda lost on me. Like I'm being told, instead of being shown. Why is this important?
Well, because if you only saw the movie and not read the Marvel comics, a lot of this stuff is unknown to the reader. It would need a lot more explained or established better. Like how Twilight in the show loves her brother, but in this- the roles have taken a real turn.
Plot wise? Barely there, but I think that's the point of calling it Act 0. Still, as a prelude or prologue- leaves things desired.
Others things bug me, but it seems more like personal issues than critiques.
I have to say I am very interested in where this is going. I wonder will Spike notice who Rarity is and mellow out sightly or will Pinkie do something stupid like surprise him causing him to attack. I can't wait to see how Spike handle being part of the team. (It would be interesting to have him not really trusting the team since he use to be their friend once. but do to one of Twi's experiments causing his greed growth to develop a personality of its own and supercharged. They then abandon him to fend for himself) Idk just a idea I just had, I favor Spike AND the Hulk over many of the characters on both teams lol.
That was interesting, I do love seeing this story again even if it is a retelling, I enjoyed when I first watched it on tv. I am wondering what you have planned for the rest of the team and how you are going to bring them into the fold. I do hope you do some chapters that are not from the show but completely original works by you. (I think it would be interesting to see something between Spike,Sweetie, and Rarity happena good old fashion love triangle) The longer this goes on the more and more I am dying to see the first big fight happen lol.
This is very good.
You shouldn't be to afraid to make changes from the cartoon, though. No one wants to read a carbon copy.
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Will we be seeing any updates from this?
wow: firing on his own daughter... (whistles) I applaud you: you managed to make this scene even MORE intense...
well, he's dead...
I...that's...
I don't care why she did it: that's just WRONG!!! also... 
why'd you do it? why'd you have to make Rarity unlikable?
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Iron will. Interesting choice for the leader.
I like it, but part of me would switch rainbow dash and twilight parts.
good story I do want more....
im a fan of this book sereis but im not a big fan of spendingany thing for the comics
i just hope he gets smashed just like in the movies
I like the combination of MCU and A:EMH elements that you used here.
I KNOw the feeling in this situation
this feels a little rushed i mean come on this dosen't feel natural at all
So, a mix of Captain America: The First Avenger and EMH, huh?
Nice.
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This Agent Tavary. We're gonna catch ourselves another HYDRA Agent. She's gonna regret ever joining them.
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Exactly.
Does Scootaloo is Black Panter? Or the Wasp? And Fluttershy is Antman. Yes?
this is beautiful
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I know how I feel about it. sadness, because of what happens to Barnes.
hope this updates soon.
Please update soon